Shadow Ninja Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Hope you like my cards. Please comment, rate them and give any suggestions if you think they need improvement. :) [spoiler=Lore]If this monster battles a higher level monster, it gains ATK equal to the Level of the monster that it battles x 100 during the Damage Step only. If this card attacks, it is switched to Defence Position at the end of the Damage Step. If your opponent attacks this card with a higher level monster, when this card is in Defence Position, they must pay 500 Life Points. [spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, destroy all non-LIGHT monsters on your opponent's side of the field. This card cannot attack on the turn it was Summoned, your opponent cannot declare an attack on this monster on that turn. Once per turn you can select 1 card in your opponent's hand to be discarded. If this monster is destroyed in battle, the attacking monster is also destroyed. [spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Summoned by tributing 2 LIGHT, Spellcaster-Type monsters from your hand or on the field. Once per turn, you can pay 200 Life Points and roll a six sided die.1: Draw 2 cards.2: Increase your Life Points by 700.3: Destroy 1 of your opponent's Spell or Trap cards.4: Select 1 monster from your deck, Level 4 or less and add it to your hand.5: Increase your opponent's Life Points by 500 and destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field.6: Pay 300 Life Points and Special summon 1 monster from your Graveyard in face-up ATK Position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Mystic Swordsman's pic is better suited for warrior Guardian Angel's effect is a bit bland, the rest is ok 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Thx..i'll fix them later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 the pic are cool intersting cards :D8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Slipstream Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 You need to change the first cards name. Its a real card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 the master of magic should be lv 8but however rating is 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFlaherty13 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 The trap seems a bit OP'd but the first card actually exists change the name8/10 (dont playgerize or i cutz youz) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 I agree with all if the above members. You also have some OCG errors: DEF Position -> Defense PositionOf - of (In the names)level -> Levelhe/she -> theysummoned -> SummonedSpellcaster type -> Spellcaster-Typegraveyard -> Graveyardnon-Light Attribute monsters -> non-LIGHT monstersLight Attribute -> LIGHTLifepoints -> Life Pointsmagic or trap cards -> Spell or Trap Cards4 stars or less -> Level 4 or lowerATK Position -> Attack Position"is equal to 0" -> "becomes 0" Try to find some better images. This has potential, but needs to be improved. A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Alright thanks for the suggestions. I edited the cards so tell me what you think now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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