Check this card for me, its it ok or OP? and a general question...

[SandJCardMakers]

Is this card too OP for a trap? Should the LP cost be increased? Should the turn time be increased or decreased?

 

THX constructive criticism is welcome!

 

 

At the cost of 2000 of your own Life Points, Special Summon 2 Level 7 or higher Dragon-type monsters from your deck. They will be destroyed in 2 of your turns if the card "Dragon and Protector" is not active on the field. If the card, "Dragon and Protector" is active on the field, they will not be destroyed by this cards effect.

 

 

Also, some times when i generate a card, the image does not come up. The picture is just white. Whats the problem?

[everlasting]

well, it seems balanced to me, but there are some OCG errors to fix, if you add the effect to the above post, I'll point them out.

[SandJCardMakers]

well' date=' it seems balanced to me, but there are some OCG errors to fix, if you add the effect to the above post, I'll point them out.

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sry i was afk for a bit...

[everlasting]

thats fine.

Your effect: At the cost of 2000 of your own Life Points, Special Summon 2 Level 7 or higher Dragon-type monsters from your deck. They will be destroyed in 2 of your turns if the card "Dragon and Protector" is not active on the field. If the card, "Dragon and Protector" is active on the field, they will not be destroyed by this cards effect.

My OCG changes: Pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon 2 Level 7 Dragon-Type monsters from your Deck, ignoring the Summoning conditions. Send the Specila Summoned monsters to the Graveyard 2 turns after this card is activated unless the Spell (or whatever type of card it is) card "Dragon And Protector" is face-up on the field.

This should do it, also, feel free to join my new club!

[Force_Flex]

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This may not be perfect, but it's better than the OCG you have now (no offense). Anyway, I think this is how it should be written. It seems OP with Level 7 and higher, so I made it lower. It still seems OP though. You should make it so they can't attack the turn they're Summoned. Once you do that, it will be better. But, the pic could use some serious changing...

 

You can pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon 2 Level 7 or lower Dragon-Type monsters from your Deck. If the card "Dragon and Protector" is not on the field, destroy the 2 Summoned monsters after 2 turns.

 

 

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[SandJCardMakers]

wats wrong w/ the pic? i think it looks sweet

[Force_Flex]

It's not a yugiohish pic...

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[Ethaniel]

Pretty good. Little OP'd, some glaring OCG errors, but the general idea is nice. I'd change the levels to 5 or lower, were I you. Or half your lifepoints for level 7.

[SandJCardMakers]

bump

[Spire]

Overpowered imo. You get to special summon 2 powerful monsters that easily. I would make it so they are destroyed during the end phase or their ATK is halved.