The Gatekeepers

[Dark Synchro]

Ok these are my first cards. Please can you rate and comment (Images from deviantart and photobucket):

 

[spoiler=Gatekeeper Kain]

Lore: So long as this card remains face-up on the field your opponent cannot Special Summon monsters from either players Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=Gatekeeper Lustor]

Lore: So long as this card remains face-up on the field your opponent cannot select Spell and Trap cards in the Graveyard as targets for card effects.

 

 

[spoiler=Gatekeeper Calistor]

Lore: You can discard this card from your hand to negate the activation of a card effect and destroy it. While this card is in the Graveyard you can Remove it and 1 other monster in your Graveyard from Play to Special Summon a Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck, whose level is equal to the combine level of the monsters Removed From Play by this cards effect. This Special Summon counts as a Synchro Summon.

 

 

[spoiler=Gatekeeper Valon]

Lore: So long as this card remains face-up on the field your opponent cannot select other "Gatekeeper" monsters you control as attack targets.

 

 

[spoiler=Gatekeeper Tiberius]

Lore: While this card is face-up on the field your opponent cannot select other "Gatekeeper" monsters you control as the targets for card effects.

 

 

[spoiler=Gatekeeper Xanovar]

Lore: Gatekeeper Calistor + 1 or more non-Tuner Zombie-type monsters

You can activate this effect during either players turn. Once per turn you can select 1 of the following effects to apply until the End Phase.

-Negate the effects of cards that target "Gatekeeper" monsters you control and that are in your Graveyard.

-Your opponent cannot select "Gatekeeper" monsters you control as attack targets

-Select 1 "Gatekeeper" monster you control. Your opponent can only Summon monsters whose Level is equal to or less than the level of the selected monster.

 

 

[spoiler=Gatekeeper Mortalivar]

Lore: 1 Zombie-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Zombie-Type monsters

Once per turn you can select 1 "Gatekeeper" monster from your Hand or Deck and send it to the Graveyard. Then you can select 1 monster in your Graveyard. This card gains the effect of the selected monster until the End Phase of your opponents next turn.

 

[Lexadin]

Not bad,Pic's could be better, a few OCG errors, however Lustor needs a lower DEF, Valon and Tiberius have the same effect and maybe Mortalivar has a bit to OP effect but I'm not shure about that. that all together a 7/10

[Dark Synchro]

I'll fix those problems, thanks :)

Also Valons effect is for Attack Targets and Tiberius' is for Card Effects

EDIT: Fixed (apart from the pics. If anyone has better pictures than the ones I'm using please can you pm them to me?)

[Dark Synchro]

Should I add some Spell and Trap support?

[ragnarok1945]

Valon and Tiberius have the same effect, change one of them

 

Also if you want to add support, let's see them

 

9/10

[Ornithopter]

Good cards i like the pics and the effects arent bad. 8.9/10

[jaster_rogue]

ok! nice cards.

8/10

:D keep making cards

[Dark Synchro]

Alright I'll add some support for them soon

I'll also make Valon and Tiberius' effects clearer, because they aren't the same. Valon is basically the only Gatekeeper your opponent can attack, and Tiberius is the only Gatekeeper your opponent can target for a targeting card effect like Tribute To The Doomed or Raigkei Break.

[ragnarok1945]

oh ok now I see, then I'll raise the rate up to 9.5/10 then

[Dark Synchro]

Thanks :)

Support Cards will be up by the end of the day

[ragnarok1945]

Glad to hear it, I'll be sure to return here to check when they go up.