Big Lez Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 These are the Arch Enemys of the "Demons of Idotia"The StoryOnce upon a time, the Thungra Demons found a mighty sword. As soon as it got into the use of their Lord Thungra. As soon as he took the sword his soul was caught by the power of Idotia. Thungra was called Idotia from that moment. He killed his own soldiers if they didn`t worked properly. Then he attacked the Angels. The Angels always were the dominating race, but with the "Powerful Idotia" they destroyed the Angels Empire. Idotia domitated the world, but than a Angel`s Rebellion started. The Angel of the 6 Masks was their Leader. The General was a former Demon. "The Angel`s Rebel". But as soon as the rebellion started, the Princess of Idotia came up and killed the Kings family. Only "The Angel's Princess" survived. Wanting her Revenge. A new War started!(all pics © by Deviantart) (i love that pic!) (thx to ALZ for the new Card Name idea- renamed from Hand in Hand with the Dark) ][spoiler=Effect]When this card is destroyed and sent to Graveyard, you can discard up to 3 LIGHT monsters from your hand to increase your Life Points by 500 for each Monster Card, you discarded by this effect. If you discarded 3 cards you can put "Subordinated Angel" back into your hand.( I changed the effect, after i realized the back to hand idea was better, than first removing him from game to get him back to Graveyard afterwards) This card is a good support for this card:[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 6 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard. This card can also be treated either as Warrior-Type, Winged Beast-Type, Dragon-Type, Spellcaster-Type or Rock-Type. This card can only be 1 Monster Type at a time, you can only choose it's Type once, during the duel.If this card is treated as Fairy-Type you gain 500 Life Points, each time you draw a card by a card effect.If this card is treated as Winged Beast-Type increase the DEF of all LIGHT monsters by 500.If this card is treated as Warrior-Type increase the ATK of all LIGHT monster by 500.If this card is treated as Dragon-Type you can destroy 1 face-down card on the field, once per turn.If this card is treated as Spellcaster-Type you can destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card, once per turn.If this card is treated as Rock-Type you can choose 1 monster on your side of the field, except of this card, the card cannot be destroyed by battle, as long this card remains on the field.The ATK and DEF of this card cannot be changed by it's own card effect. This card is new and shall be Supported by the Subordinated Angel[spoiler=View Effect]This card can be Special Summoned if a monster is returned from Graveyard to a card owners hand. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect increase the DEF of this card by the original ATK of the monster returned to it's owners hand. Once per turn, you can decrease this card's DEF by 500 to increase your Life Points by 800. When this card's DEF is reduced to 0, destroy this card. [spoiler=View Effect]This card is also treated as a DARK monster. This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Normal Summoned increase the ATK of this card equals to the number of LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard x 300. When this card inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points remove 1 LIGHT monster from your Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by 500. [spoiler=View Effect]This card can be Special Summoned if your opponent controls only DARK monsters. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect increase the DEF of each LIGHT monster equals to the number of DARK monsters your opponent controls x 200 and increase this card's ATK equals to the number of LIGHT monsters on your side of the field x 200. [spoiler=View Effect]As long this card remains in face-up Attack Position LIGHT monsters cannot be destroyed by battle, excluding this card. When this card is destroyed by battle, while in face-up Attack Position, you can Special Summon this card in face-up Defense Position during your Standby Phase. ________________Here are some new cards:[spoiler=View Effect]This card can be Special Summoned if you control "Angel of Living Death". If this card is Summoned by it's own effect, destroy up to 3 card's you control. Increase your Life Points by 800, for each destroyed card. When you control this card in face-up Attack Position, while you control "Angel of Living Death", you can Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster during each of your Standby Phases. [spoiler=View Effect]This card can be Special Summoned by Tributing up to 3 LIGHT monsters you control. If this card is Special Summoned on it's own effect, increase the ATK of this card by 200, for each Tributed LIGHT monster. Send this card to Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 1-6 LIGHT monster from Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 wow eeeeeeeeeeeeetoo great for my head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 xD lots of thx im glad you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Those are really,really awesome cards.Artwork is great,OCG is perfect (can't find any mistake) and effects are well balanced. 9.8/10 Also, for a Subordinated Angel ,did you mean :" If you discarded 3 cards you can put "Subordinated Angel" back into your Hand." or is it "If you discarded 3 cards you can put "Subordinated Angel" back into your Graveyard."? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Graveyard ;)..Because he is removed..and you can remove him again to put 3 LIGHT monsters to graveyard....Thats how you get 6 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard as fast as possible ;) Thx for the comment..=) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Very good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Thx, ill think about making some others..but i never wanted to support my enemy xD( LIGHT & Angels^^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rapahael Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Good cards i like the pics and the effects are fine. 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Thank you =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 well balanced out, took a while to get it all down though, but it works out great 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antist0opid Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 awesomness 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Awesome cards! 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Lots of thx =)=) I would also like to have the comment of the person rated this thread with 1 Star...whats the matter with these cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I didn't read the last card, I don't like cards with an effect to long for hte card so I don't judge them. I think you made a mistake at your third card: If you discarded 3 cards you can put "Subordinated Angel" back into your Graveyard. isn't it already in the graveyard? I would make it that it Special Summons it self. 7/10 I like the first card, it is some nice life points recovery 8/10I like the second card also but I don't see how it is "Hand in Hand with Darkness" the first part is more a "Clash with Darkness". 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I didn't read the last card' date=' I don't like cards with an effect to long for hte card so I don't judge them. I think you made a mistake at your third card: [i']If you discarded 3 cards you can put "Subordinated Angel" back into your Graveyard.[/i] isn't it already in the graveyard? I would make it that it Special Summons it self. 7/10 I like the first card, it is some nice life points recovery 8/10I like the second card also but I don't see how it is "Hand in Hand with Darkness" the first part is more a "Clash with Darkness". 7/101. Well 6 Masks = 6 Effects ;)2. Well, he first had to be removed from play, but by now i changed it`s whole effect.3. Yes it is, and i love the pic^^4. I dont know. it was the first name that came up to my mind I added "Cybertronic Angel" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Only thing is Cybetronic Angel's atk should be slightly higher 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I would Increase the ATK of your Third Card to 1500 so that Cybertronic Angel can decrease her DEF to an precise 0. Also This card can be Special Summoned if a monster is returned from Graveyard to a card owners hand. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect increase the DEF of this card by the original ATK of the monster returned to it's owners hand. Once per turn, you can decrease this card's DEF by 500 to increase your Life Points by 800. When this card's DEF is reduced to 0, destroy this card. It doesn't say that that is the only way to Special Summon it, so if you would use Monster Reborn you would activated an effect that cannot be activated because no monster returned to the owners hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Cybertronic Angel is perfect.I like the idea of decreasing ATK/DEF to do a certain effect (in your case,increasing Life Points). 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Quite nice. (everyone else already said everything I was going to say.) I like these continue I would like to see ore. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Thank you all for the nice rating&Ah, youre right again ALZ..xDI made this card in about 20 Seconds..i knew there would be a mistake..God damned... But 1500 ATK for Subordinated Angel is to high for my taste & the 3 stars...Cy. Ang. can be supported by more cards than that Wink.. I added new cards..rate them seperately from the other 5 please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AirAgent06 Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 10/10 for the first five 9.5/10 for the last four (btw on the last card i noticed that you spelled time wrong. for the record i usually dont care about spellings...) comments for cards in general hav already been said...good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Thx..also thx for the Grammar fix..dumb mistake^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Good cards. But Dunecat has a question. "Where did you get the `Clash of Darkness` pic from?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Its from Deviantart.All my pics are from deviantart ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 9/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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