STORM KNIGHT Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 after the origonal post i noticed ( more like you all noticed) their were quite a few flaws in "chakra seperation"so i have redone ithope you likes took a lot of work ( not really =p)(before) (after)any whooo this is based on one of my favourite concepts chakra it can be used to heal or cause pain so its pretty cool if you ask me but i had to put some sorta limiter on since its like a double whammy of solemn wishes and nightmare wheeli personally would abuse the healing also my first card idea has been finished the mighty storm knight lore:When this card attacks an opponents attack position monster when your opponents life point are higher then your lifepoints increase this cards atk by 300 points and inflict differnce of the monsters atk and this cards atk to your opponent as battle damage.also storm knights effect is sorta like to keep my opponets lifepoints down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 What's the point in paying 1000 if you gain only 500? Bad OCG (Original Card Grammar) http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html Pay 1000 Life Points to active effect of this card during your End Phase. You can select one of the following effects: *Increase your Life Points by 500 *Deal 500 damage to your opponent. No background on picture 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 for Storm Knight I don't understand why you didn't say in the text it's also treated as a warrior type 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Seems abit strange but I see what your trying to do, your making Tremendous Fire a continuous Trap Card....You sneaky git you!! lol. But Anonymous is right why pay 1000 LP to get only 500 back?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Bad pic, bad effect, bad OCG and weaker version of Poison of the Old Man3/10 (That goes for Chakra Separation) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STORM KNIGHT Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 THE PAY 1000 IS AN ACTIVATION COST FOR USING IT FOR THE REST OF THE TURNS i might have messed it up so i see how you might think it would be like 1000 a turn but its not meant to be its like when you activate it for the first time if that helps you understand the idea *fixes would be nice*What's the point in paying 1000 if you gain only 500? Bad OCG (Original Card Grammar) http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html Pay 1000 Life Points to active effect of this card during your End Phase. You can select one of the following effects: *Increase your Life Points by 500 *Deal 500 damage to your opponent. No background on picture 3/10 have a proper background on the card made the detail of the pictures unoticeablefor Storm Knight I don't understand why you didn't say in the text it's also treated as a warrior type 9/10 didnt want to over complicate it but that is a good idea "i was think of treated as both a warrior and a thunder"thanks for the comments if the background bugging so much idea on a better one would be nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 No Chakra Separation card is fail but Storm Knight is ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonazn Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Seems abit strange but I see what your trying to do' date=' your making Tremendous Fire a continuous Trap Card....You sneaky git you!! lol. But Anonymous is right why pay 1000 LP to get only 500 back??[/quote'] The 500 life points you gain/inflict, could come in handy maybe near the end of a duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Would be better with a background, but the effect is interesting. 8.5/10 is my rate (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Ridiculously horrendous OCG, for starters (and, oh, I'm not usually a stickler for OCG. So, let's render it into something I recognize: Pay 1000 Life Points. During each of your End Phases, select and activate 1 of the following effects: * Inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. * Increase your Life Points by 500 points. Mine verdict? Ah, useful in most Burn decks, if trampled by the transitory glories of Tremendous Fire, Ookazi, and even Hinotama. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 terrible OCG the first card was better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STORM KNIGHT Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Ridiculously horrendous OCG' date=' for starters (and, oh, I'm not usually a stickler for OCG. So, let's render it into something I recognize: [i']Pay 1000 Life Points. During each of your End Phases, select and activate 1 of the following effects: * Inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. * Increase your Life Points by 500 points. [/i] Mine verdict? Ah, useful in most Burn decks, if trampled by the transitory glories of Tremendous Fire, Ookazi, and even Hinotama. did you notice the new version only has an initail 500 point cost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 so la la 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 OCG is very bad try going here ----> http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html I guess the new version is OPed, I like the older 1 (except for the pic) 6.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gunggang777 Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 ^Very2 overpowered cardReported as a SPAM========================My ratingNeeded OCG fixes..."Use Capital"8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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