Archangel of destiny Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 This is my Fallen Angel set.I would really like to hear your opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohfaker Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 Realy awescome cards!! i like it !! They are f_cking good!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cutipi97 Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 great cards 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Deathbot Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 great cards but crap now i need to change the set im making! no matter ima noob ill deal with it just change the names. And do you want the pack i made? its called Angels fall from Grace.[br]Click here to feed me a Soul![br]Get your own at PokePlushies! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted November 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 I will probably make more i just need a few ideas thanks for rating my set.Currently i don't have any ideas for new Fallen Angels so if anybody has some ideas please PM.i will rep ya if i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 AZERAT I actually like this set. You did a good job 8/10Most of the cards are balanced & well made. Althought a little OCG problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 Good cards with great ideas,but unfinished ones.I would tweak and edit fire palace because its OCG is slightly undisclosed.Get it??So this is a fine set of cards. I thought that Lucifer has bad summoning conditions(because of Special Summoning instead for Normal Summoning for ,no more and no less ,the same 2 tributes that have to be payed) ,but when I saw that there is another card(Fire palace) bonded with Lucifer(when it is on your side of the field),I understood everything.So you were trying to express why did you made easier summoning conditions by just connecting these two mentioned cards.Infact that doesn't ruin your card,but it makes it good.So, as I said, partially undisclosed OCG and not quite well OCG(Official Card Grammar).But set with a lot of potentional.Needs couple of card tweaks!!!8.2/10! I have kind of feeling that you didn't count on this type of symbiosa! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted November 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 Two new cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 Good newly cards added,but your Elios might use a lesser time until it's effect has resolved(instead for 5 make it for 3 OF YOUR turns.)And I would lower the ATK of your Garaziel by 100.Overall for all Set 8.4/10!-Lesser grammar mistakes.If you would just not be a lazy(pardon!) and change your grammar,it would be 8.8(9)/10!!!That alone would make it a great Set!!!I lke the effect of a "Reaviling the death's true face and its effect is logical with the name and pic,but I the effect is UNDISCLOSED.;*From where do you Special Summon your "Elios";*Why don't you make this card a Trap counter because it will make more sense(only if you listen my suggestion)-------------->"This card can only be activated during your opponent's turn,in response,when your opponent Special Summons or adds a monster from his/her Graveyard.Pay 800 of your Life Points and Special Summon 1 "Elios, The Fallen Angel Of Time" from your Deck or Graveyard to your side of the field." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crni32 Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 awesome,9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinz Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 very good mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devil.dreamz Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 9/10 tops nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted November 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 2 new cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Nice and simple new cards,altough I would change a grammar of your "Alkarion"(and it doesn't seem like an Fallen Angel to me!)TWEAK;------->"This card's Attribute is also treated as DARK.This card increases its ATK for each WATER monster your opponent has in his/her Graveyard.".Anyway,9.3/10 for those 3 new added cards.Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 omgg! these are like the ultimate angel cards!!!! jeese, good stuff, good stuff lol 10/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted November 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 post updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 Grammar probs for a new card.Great new added Trap Card and a bit underpowered.However,if you change your Trap Card's last effect sentence,that "for maintaining this card's effect you CANNOT pay your LP" into "if you DON'T pay",because of giving a choice to the player.You want to know why?That's because you reffer to only non-DARK monsters so you just encompass all other attributes,except DARK ones and it is hard to say only that you must pay your LP,because of the nature of your set and all elements that are included in.(and even situation you might find in a Duel if this cards exist.)You should have;----------->You can only activate this card when your monster that includes "Fallen Angel" in its card name is destroyed as a result of battle.As long as this card remains face-up on the field,each of your Battle Phase,you can decrease ATK of all non-DARK monsters on the field by half until the end of that same Battle Phase.You must pay 500 Life Points at each of your Standby Phases,otherwise this card is destroyed and removed from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 rly good! pics and everything! there are some OCG mistakes but big deal! these are great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Your last card is the best,I think.Do you know what is your mistake on the last one{angel of night}?The last sentence is making it underpowered."You cannot use your Spell Cards" until the end of that turn".No,it should be like "This card cannot be affected by the effects of Spell Cards that specially designate this face-up card as a target.So why?Overall for your last one if we exclude that"You cannot use Spells"...........9.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Mr.Bustos Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 Great cards...i want to see those cards on sale!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted November 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 post updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 Your last card is sooooo underpowered,because you have to have 1000 Life points(maximum) and you have to have 3 mons.And you get only 3000!!!!You should have this;It should be a Trap Counter because of my this card effect belowˇˇˇˇˇˇ------>This card can only be activated when you have 3000 or less Life Points while your opponent is activating his/her card effect or attacks with his/her monster you directly.You can then remove from play 3 "Fallen Angel" cards from your Graveyard and pay half of your Life Points to increase your Life Points equal to the half of combined ATK(or combined DEF (NOT HALF DEF,if yoour Set is more ATK oriented(and it is)) of your "Fallen Angel" monsters you removed from play by this card's effect"(Sorry it took so long,I was writing this effect for 2 minutes.)--->I hope I helped,LOL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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