pojo114 Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Hey here a some of my SAMURAI set cards 8) Please comment and rate and tell me what to improve on i take no credit for the images some of these are popular but most are realistic so here yah go........ oops there are to jaces it is supposed to be Garruck Wildaxe that can destroy face-down defense cards instantly wihtout applying effects sorry You may only equip this card to a Warrior- type monster when you are losing and have less monster on the field than your opponent. The monster quipped with this card gains 600 AtK. The monster is destroyed if it does not attack every battlephase. This monster is then destroyed after 6 turns. This card may only be used to special summon 1 "Hanzon Hattori" from your hand by removing from play monster from your hand and field whose level equals 8. This card may only be ritual summoned by the effect of "Ninja Star Ceremony". When this card attacks, increase this monsters attack by 600. When this card is destroyed, you may special summon one Beast-type monster from your graveyard. When a monster on your side of the field attacks, you may pay 500 life points to increase their attack by 350 and have the following effect: A monster using Rasengan that attack a defense posistion monster with a defense lower than the atack of the monster, inflict the difference as battle damage to the opponents life points. When there are no monster on your side of the field, you may special summon one level 4 or lower Warrior-type monster from your hand. If you summon a monster this way, it must attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Red Qiang needs an effect most of your monster cards have too bland effects (they need more effects) 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Some of the pics are good, others are not so good. Effects need a bit of work, they are too short and dull. The OCG is not bad, however it is not good either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 If you was to put the effects of your long text cards under neath them I could re-write them for you matey as could everyone else, it would be a great help. Jace the WizardWhile this card is face-up on the field increase the ATK and DEF of all Warrior-Type monsters by 300 points GolemYou cannot use this card as part of a Tribute Summon. This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Trap Cards. This could do with a more creative name like Rock Golem or Massive Fist Golem. Normal Monster This Samurai warrior carries a large qiang, this great weapons power is said to be amazing to behold. does that sound better??? Samurai Attack WolfThis card can be treated as 2 Tributes for the Tribute Summon of a Warrior-Type monster. Simple but useful effect, but dont forget to make cards that can use this effect matey!! Like I said above you need to put the effects below other then that not bad at all matey can see some time has gone into these 8.5/10 OCG needs some work but dont give up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pojo114 Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Thanks for the crtiqueing its very apprectiated and ill release the set when im donei posted the effects for you abbatorn RRRRGHHHH MATEY!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Some effects are 2 bland I agree, some pics need backgrounds and some needs to be replaced, and why did u post Jace The Wizard twice? 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 meh 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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