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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you control 1 monster with "Darth" in their name and by releasing one DARK monster you control. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand in order to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls with equal or lower level. You can switch a monsters battle position x1 for each monster in the Graveyard due to this cards effect.

 

I went away for a while and handed my account over to my friend now I'm back (his card effects had no flow)[/align]

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Firstly love the pic and the idea, I was going to make a small Star Wars set but hey I think Ill leave it to you!! Cool pic, name is looooooong, maybe The Sith Apprentice, just an idea. I think you put a capital on to on the cards name but not the...a small error I believe. I wont tell no one shhhh lol. The effect is great I like it alot original, powerful but not over, excellent a few simple things you mucked up that I noticed but all in all 9.5/10...Like to see more of these matey

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you control 1 monster with "Darth" in its name and by releasing 1 DARK monster you control. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand in order to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls with equal or lower level. You can switch a monsters battle position for each monster in the Graveyard due to this cards effect.

 

Removed the one and put a 1 in lol...sounds strange when you put it like that.

tok the their out and put in its

and removed the x1 from the last part of the effect about battle position switching.

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8.6/10. you had OCG errors and the name is kinda dumb. it should just be "Darth Vader's Secret Apprentice"

as for OCG i tried to fix it.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you control 1 monster with "Darth" in their name and by Tributing one DARK monster you control. Once per turn you can discard 1 monster from your hand in order to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls with an equal or lower level then the card discarded. You can switch a monster's battle position one time for each monster sent to the Graveyard by this card's effect. hope i helped. :mrgreen:

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