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Ivy - The Poisonous Fairy


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The OCG could use a bit of work, but the effect does make sense.

 

A few fixes:

ATK, not atk

this card, not this monster

your field, not your side of the field

Attack Position, not attack mode

 

The picture does not really match the name.

 

7/10


OCG fix:

 

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to 1 monster you control as an Equip Spell Card OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, increase this card's ATK by 500 and decrease the equipped monster's ATK by 500. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.)

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The OCG could use a bit of work' date=' but the effect does make sense.

 

A few fixes:

ATK, not atk

this card, not this monster

your field, not your side of the field

Attack Position, not attack mode

 

The picture does not really match the name.

 

7/10[hr']

OCG fix:

 

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to 1 monster you control as an Equip Spell Card OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, increase this card's ATK by 500 and decrease the equipped monster's ATK by 500. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.)

 

 

Thanks alot. I will work on that.

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I dont think it should be a Union! Iron Chain Snake (Or w/e its called) isnt a union but it equips to monsters!

 

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During your Main Phase, you can equip this card to 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. The equipped monster loses 500 ATK and DEF during each of your opponents Standby phase. When the equipped monsters ATK decreases to 0, destroy the equipped monster and Special Summon this card in DEF position on your side of the field.

 

There I made it a little more balanced :3

 

6/10 for OCG but with my fix 8/10 or maybe 9/10

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pic is weird

 

should be a union monster

 

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I dont think it should be a Union! Iron Chain Snake (Or w/e its called) isnt a union but it equips to monsters!

 

OCG:

During your Main Phase' date=' you can equip this card to 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. The equipped monster loses 500 ATK and DEF during each of your opponents Standby phase. When the equipped monsters ATK decreases to 0, destroy the equipped monster and Special Summon this card in DEF position on your side of the field.

 

There I made it a little more balanced :3

 

6/10 for OCG but with my fix 8/10 or maybe 9/10

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