first card

[novemberstar]

Hey this is one of my first cards I made

Edited card

[stunnero101]

hey welcome to ycm but the effect too bland

and his attack is too high for a level 3

re do and i rate..ok

[~Final_Ryeden~]

UGH the pics has no backround and the ocg is really bad 3/10

[DarknessBoy32]

Same reason as ^above^

Red the card and ill rate.

[Spirit of DMG]

hey welcome to ycm but the effect too bland

and his attack is too high for a level 3

re do and i rate..ok

 

^that.

[Ornithopter]

Pic is good for a new member;

A little OP'd for its lvl

DEF: 0000 - try to put only "0"

Some OCG errors, but for a new member, its good!

7/10 is my rate

[janlukky]

i love FE titles see if ya can make the characters of 6-8

thats a start anyways ......sorry for being late

[Bayweena]

its all wrong come see my cards they are awsome

[DeREVOLUTION]

its all wrong come see my cards they are awsome

Do not listen to this guy JHE'S the one who is wrong. You have a nice idea for the card, but you didnt really put it together. First off, try finding a good pic with a background. Try staying away from Google, use something like DA or photobucket. Also, your card's ATK should be lower. Say maybe around 2000-2300? Now to work on your OCG (official card grammer). Look around at other's cards to get the right idea. Try asking around (by pm) to mods. Such as Hunter and Icyblue. Its a really good card, but your not getting the main idea. I will rate once you give a nice decent card. ^_^

[Spirit of DMG]

well, you upped the level, which balanced out the ATK. If you want him to have no defence, just put "0" not "0000" well, lets see, DMG and I give it a 4/10

[xzMasteRzx]

Your English is unbeliveably terrible. Put periods in the right places, and the OCG is downright...bad. Please, try harder to make a card that you believe will accually grab people's attention.

Score: 1/10

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Alright, I was kinda mean during that last comment. Look, there is no periods to seperate the sentences you wrote. Also, the ATK is kinda high. It's not a bad card; it just doesn't show that you put effort into making this card. The picture, the effect, the ATK. It's all wrong. I'm trying not to be mean. Don't worry about it though. My first card was so bad and messed up. (lol it was horrible..)

 

Re-Score: 5/10

[BlackSkullCortez]

its all wrong come see my cards they are awsome

Do not listen to this guy JHE'S the one who is wrong. You have a nice idea for the card' date=' but you didnt really put it together. First off, try finding a good pic with a background. Try staying away from Google, use something like DA or photobucket. Also, your card's ATK should be lower. Say maybe around 2000-2300? Now to work on your OCG (official card grammer). Look around at other's cards to get the right idea. Try asking around (by pm) to mods. Such as Hunter and Icyblue. Its a really good card, but your not getting the main idea. I will rate once you give a nice decent card. ^_^

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I agree. But I think that there is a better sources for OCG: actual cards. Look at the cards, they will probably be your best source for phrasing cards effects. The only good pics from google are from Photobucket, but I don't care about the backround.

[metroid]

Better than my first card

[Uchiha Sasuke XII]

well' date=' you upped the level, which balanced out the ATK. If you want him to have no defence, just put "0" not "0000" well, lets see, DMG and I give it a 4/10

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Good Point. Just put one "0" instead of so many. Anyway, welcome to YCM and let's see...7/10.

[gustavosuarez]

welcome, but you need to work in your OCG (oficial card grammar). try to use a better pic and use previous real cards how a help to writte good the effects. i dont rate you this time. you need to work.