Melnia Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 So I decide to make new Neos to replace the original six Neo-spacian with new six Neo-spacian. All of them are self drawn Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on the field and decrease it's original ATK by its Level x 200 until the End Phase. "Elemental Hero Neos" + "Neo-Spacian Snow Polar"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by returning the above cards from your side of the field to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) When this card battles, decrease the ATK of the monster it's battling by 200x its Level. This card returns to the Extra Deck during the End Phase. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each card in their hand. "Elemental Hero Neos" + "Neo-Spacian Blood Bat"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by returning the above cards from your side of the field to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) Once per turn, when you inflict damage to your opponent, this card gains ATK equal to the damage dealt. This card returns to the Extra Deck during the End Phase. This card gain ATK equal to the number of Effect Monster your opponent control x600 When this card attacks or is attacked, randomly discard 1 card from your Hand based on its type apply the proper effect: ● Monster: Increase this card ATk by the level of that card x200 until the end of the Battle Phase● Spell: Destroy both monster without damage calculation then inflict 500 damage to both player ● Trap: End the Battle Phase and change this card into Defense Position(also suggestion for Blaze Salamnader's effect) OCG fixed plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Pretty good so far. 1st card's effect is too short and ordinary though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Nice cards dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 @regalsword65 I agree on that but I don't want it to be too OPed @ShinyBlade THX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 "by 500 pts"You dont have to write this..Self Drawn Cards = +3 / Good Looking Self Drawn +2 = +5Wont Rate the OCG (-3/3 - ??/7)The effects are ok. +1 / +1(new member with good effects)7/7 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Suggestion effect for neo-spacian polar: When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, select one card on the field and look at it.If it is a monster, this monster gains 100 ATK points at each one of your Standby Phases. If this card is used in a Fusion Summon, you can Special Summon one level 4 or lower "Neo-Spacian" monster from your deck. Hope I helped! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Genuine! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Suggestion effect for neo-spacian polar: When this card is Normal Summoned successfully' date=' select one card on the field and look at it.If it is a monster, this monster gains 100 ATK points at each one of your Standby Phases. If this card is used in a Fusion Summon, you can Special Summon one level 4 or lower "Neo-Spacian" monster from your deck. Hope I helped! :)[/quote'] When this card is Normal Summoned successfully( is not really needed), select one = 1 select one card on the field and look at it. face-down card on the field and flip it up.If it is a monster, this monster gains 100 ATK points at = during each one of your Standby Phases. If this card is used ..to Fusion Summon a monster, you can Special Summon one = 1 level 4 or lower "Neo-Spacian" monster from your deck. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Not bad card, the images are good being self drawn, the OCG is alright and has been fixed, and the effects are decent. The first card isn't too creative in terms of the effect, and the second card seems underpowered because it returns to the Fusion Deck, maybe remove that effect or require a Life Point payment so it can be kept on the field. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 @Bengal Thx I'll see what I can do Edited I fogot to mention it "all Neos monster return to Fusion at the End phase without Neo space" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Nice pics, OCG already has been fixed, balanced in my opinion. 8.7/10 is my rate (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 @Gijinka THX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 2nd card fix: Elemental Hero Neos + Neo-Spacian Snow PolarThis card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by returning the above cards on your side of the field to your deck. ("Polymerization" is not used.)When this card battles a monster, decrease the ATK of that monster by 500. This card will return to the Fusion Deck during the End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 8/10 A little OP cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 @Namo THX@lacikus Which one ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Nice cards, I lol'd at the first one's pic, dunno why it just has something funny about it. 9/10 I can't wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 with the OCG already fixed/suggested, I'll overlookd that. The pics look great, for some reason the 1st looks almost toonish to me 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 @TheWorm55 lol I laugh at it too when I first done because it just a fat bear@ragnarok THX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 New card Add!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Blood Neos looks balanced out, shame there's no real blood in the pic 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 There is a blood his BG is bloody Neo Space lol THX anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinalShinobi Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 This is my first post on this site ^_^ Neo-Spacian Snow Polar(Old Effect)Once per Turn you can select one monster on the field, decrease that monster original ATK by the card level time 200 until your End Phrase. (Fixed Effect)Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on the field and decrease it's original ATK by its Level x 200 until the End Phase. Neo-Spacian Blood Bat(Old Effect)Once per Turn Inflict 300 Damage to your opponent Life Point for each card in their Hand. (Fixed Effect)Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each card in their hand. Elemental Hero Snow Neos(Old Effect)Elemental Hero Neos + Neo-Spacian Snow PolarThis card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by returning the above cards on your side of the field to your deck. ("Polymerization" is not used.)When this card battles a monster, decrease the ATK of that monster by 500. This card will return to the Fusion Deck during the End Phase. (Fixed Effect)"Elemental Hero Neos" + "Neo-Spacian Snow Polar"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by returning the above cards from your side of the field to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) When this card battles, decrease the ATK of the monster it's battling by 500. This card returns to the Extra Deck during the End Phase. Elemental Hero Blood Neos(Old Effect)Elemental Hero Neos + Neo-Spacian Blood BatThis card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by returning the above cards on your side of the field to your deck. ("Polymerization" is not used.) Once per Turn when you Inflict damage to your opponent, this card gain Atk equal to the Damage your opponent receive. This card return to the Fusion Deck during the End Phase. (Fixed Effect)"Elemental Hero Neos" + "Neo-Spacian Blood Bat"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by returning the above cards from your side of the field to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) Once per turn, when you inflict damage to your opponent, this card gains ATK equal to the damage dealt. This card returns to the Extra Deck during the End Phase. I had problems with the wording of the 2 Neos Fusions. It's a bit unusual but I did the best I could =] Blood Neos' effect is sort of hard to figure out. Is it any form of damage? Did you mean "...when this card inflicts Battle Damage..."? All I did was correct the OCG errors I could find so I didn't change its effect in any way. Also, Snow Neos seems very underpowered D: Maybe it should have a similar effect to that of Snow Polar's Level = ATK Decrease? Up to you ^_^ Hope I helped =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 THX for the fixed and advice and I'll see if I can think of some more powerful effect for Snow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Cool. I like uniqueness and balance. 9.5/10 (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 THX and YAY for 9.5 lol OCG fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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