Kurevin Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 > On a scale of 1-10 what would you give these cards?> Please note any OCG errors and on what card.> Sorry about the Fake-Types I may change that.> There are 11 sets Sonic(son), Dark(dar), Other(oth), Chao(cha), Badnicks(bad), Team(tea), Flicky(fli), Cyber(cyb), Zombie(zom), Attempt(att) and Negative(neg).> "Badnicks" are going to be Eggmans robots (that is what the older ones were called)> All "Sonic" are complete.> I'm working on "Dark"> "Other" "Chao" "Badnicks" "Team" "Flicky" "Cyber" "Zombie" "Attempt" and "Negative" are not started but i do have the ideas written down as well as pictures> Enjoy and look for more cards when I update! Unfortunately my friend and I wont be working on these for a while unless anyone really wants me to (Hya hya hya hya hya) >The cards are in spoilers by the way :lol: [spoiler=Sonic] Silver needs "The Sol Emeralds" because I thought since him and blaze are from the same deminsion why can't they use the same emeralds. [spoiler=Dark] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeMaster Calvin Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 fake types and OCG isnt great. pics are pretty bad too. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 okay first fake typeswork on your OCGall the emeralds have the same effectthen the master emerald just has some totally different effectpics are overusedpics need backgroundsDarkspines = DarkspineEvil Darkspine pic shouldn't be like thatNight approaches and Were Monster?Ritual needs an effect or some sort of drawbackChaos emeralds can't all be on the field at once (i think)Badnick???Excalibur needs an effect2/10 try harder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 You need to work on your OCG, but since you're new here, I'll cut you some slack. Decent cards, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 okay first fake typeswork on your OCGall the emeralds have the same effectthen the master emerald just has some totally different effectpics are overusedpics need backgroundsDarkspines = DarkspineEvil Darkspine pic shouldn't be like thatNight approaches and Were Monster?Ritual needs an effect or some sort of drawbackChaos emeralds can't all be on the field at once (i think)Badnick???Excalibur needs an effect This, like every other sonic thread, is a plain- out FAIL!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bangverde Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 okay first fake types work on your OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Kittens Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 I see some real potential here. Your OCG is pretty solid for the most part. Some fixes you might consider: 1) Don't make fake types. Sonic and friends would probably be Beast or Beast-Warrior type monsters.2) Knuckes should probably be given a negative effect. Most (except for 1 that I can think of) 2000+ ATK 4-star monsters have some sort of drawback.3) OCG could use a little work. Take these questions into mind: How is it activated? What kinds of cards does it affect? What is the ATK and DEF of my monster (for when creating drawbacks and such)4) I'm pretty sure Ritual monsters cannot be summoned from your deck.5) Consider giving each Chaos Emerald a different effect Other than that thesse are looking pretty good. Can't wait to see more. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurevin Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 I also made a WerechidnaI made a 7 chaos emrald cardBadnick is a Fake type I get alot about the Fake Types but me and my friend duel with these and he has the dar cards and i have the son ones, so there made to duel each other but thanks for telling me that. (I could have sworn it was Darkespines Sonic)We thought summoning ritual monsters from your deck would be easier.can someone help me with my OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Kittens Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 I will! I'd be glad to help. Just PM me any questions you have. If I can't answer them, then head to the Newb Defense League. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurevin Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Do you know whats wrong with my OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Kittens Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Sonic: When is his effect activated? Answer this question and I think you'll be good here. Also, if you could post some "Badnick" cards that would be helpful. Tails: Where are the monsters with "Sonic" in thier name located? The field? The Graveyard? England? Knuckles: What if your opponent sends one of thier own "Master Emerald" cards they control to the Graveyard? And if you destroy it yourself then you can do some major damage. The effect should read "When a "Master Emerald" you control is destroyed by an opponent's card's effect..." Also, maybe you should have Knuckles only being on the field if "Master Emerald" is on the field. Chaos Emeralds: Their effect should read like this: "The equipped monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF." Master Emerald: Should read like this: "Once per turn, [insert effect here]." Excaliber Sonic/Werehog: the bit about the name should be after the summoning conditions. And yes, while it is easier to summon a ritual monster from the deck, that is precicely why you can't. It just makes it too easy. The rituals should also have the number of stars written on them. Darkspines: "This monster's name is treated as "Sonic the Hedgehog."" You should also put in there something about "If "World Rings"/"Darkspines Sonic" is not in [location it needs to be] then this monster is destroyed." Super Sonic: I would say the effect should be something like this: "This monster cannot be Normal Summoned. This monster can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Sonic the Hedgehog" equipped with at least 1 "Chaos Emerald"." There. I think that's everything. If I missed anything please let me know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurevin Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Sonic: his effect is activated when summoned and the badnick cards are in a set by themselves exept metal sonic whose in dar. Tails: Forgot its supposed to be on the field. Knuckles: since hes the guardian of the master emerald it does count if its on your opponnents side of the field. Chaos Emeralds: Oh Master Emerald: That does make more sence Excaliber Sonic/Werehog: Thanks Darkspines: the quots are there ther just not appering for some Unknown reason Super Sonic: i think thats really good In about 5 min after i fix those ill post more (Sorry i most likely wont post the ones i re-did but if you want me to i will) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Kittens Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Glad I could be of help. The thing about OCG is that you have to cover pretty much any questions that someone might ask about the effect. Why don't you just go back and edit your first post? You can get rid of the ones with the errors while simultaniously posting the ones that have been corrected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UltimateOTK7 Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Whats so bad bout the OCG? Its not that bad. I think the cards are pretty good. Ima n00b 2 btw XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Good cards have good OCG. Cards that aren't very realistic, don't have great OCG.Do you want good cards or unrealistic cards?Pictures could use some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 I will give you a 4.5/10 because very confuse , some are great, other aren't so...well, you know... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 bad ocg....fake types....some needs background.....6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurevin Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 I'm about to post the first few DARK and just for the heads up Eggmans type is Genious and there is a Badnick type. This dosnt mean the SONIC ones are done there are still many more of them and look out for BADNICK, CHAO, and OTHERsome have no backround on pourpose sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurevin Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 New Cards!!! remember i need your help to make these better. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 OMG CRAZY AND AWESOME CARDS 9.3/10 you should see my hedgehog and a very special emerald search for g-tron remake, you will like it. One more thing you forgot team dark(shadow,rouge and omega) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 ^Please do not advertise threads^ Anyway, you gotta work on your cards. Get real types with good OCG. Try using better pics as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Anyway, you gotta work on your cards. Get real types with good OCG. Try using better pics as well. Agreed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurevin Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 What? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 [align=center]BAD.I don't even want to say why.0/10[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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