luvablekitten Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 heya guys just thought i would post what iv'e been making because im bored :3 i will continue to make this set/deck whatever you want to call it :3"Princess Eria The Exiled" + "Hand Maiden"This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by effect of "Meeting Of Light And Dark". Once per turn if this card is in face-up Attack Position, by removing 2 cards from your Graveyard from play, destroy all monsters your opponent controls. When this card's effect is activated, switch it to Defense Position. This card's Battle Position cannot be switched until your next Standby Phase.algothar's spirit effect =This card cannot Declare An attack, By discarding 5 cards from your hand to the Graveyard you can destroy all Monsters,Spells and traps (including this card)Then add 1"Princess Eria The Exiled" From your Deck or Graveyard To the field in face up attack position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Good first cards 9/10, Make more plz(btw the pics are over used) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luvablekitten Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Thanks arch :3 and yeah i gathered as much about the cards being overused hard to find loads that arnt :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Overused pics and there are some minor OCG errors. Apart from that these cards aren't bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 minor OCG errors nice for newbie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 some vanillas that need effects, Meeting of Light and Dark's pic doesn't seem to suit the name overall it's still well done for early cards though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingnova unlimited Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Well done for a newb.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luvablekitten Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 thanks for comments people i am working on some more right now and making the effects of some of the cards actually make sense :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 that's good, even with support I still usually dislike vanillas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luvablekitten Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 hehe yeah same but most of my normals will be used for fusions and such so i thought it balanced it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 all right, but I'm not raising the rate until all your vanillas have effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luvablekitten Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 hehe sorceress curran :effect makes ragnarok1945 increase theier rating by 1 billion :3 and ill make effects for em :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 ..Well time to (hopefully not) shatter the illusion of amazing fantastical cards. I'm a serious rater as you will no doubt come to learn. Cards are in order[spoiler=Card 1]This card's effect has OCG errors. Do not shorten words except ATK and DEF. Also its OP since the card being summoned is a fusion put, "You can discard the 2 fusion material monsters for "Queen~~" to special summon her" except with proper OCG. [spoiler=Card 2] Give it an effect. This Picture is vastly overused. [spoiler=Card 3]It is OP (Overpowering) you need to lower the attack increase to just 700 at the least. [spoiler=Card 4]OCG Fix: Write it exactly like this ""Princess Eria The Exiled" + "Hand Maiden"This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by effect of "Meeting Of Light And Dark". Once per turn if this card is in face-up Attack Position, by removing 2 cards from your Graveyard from play, destroy all monsters your opponent controls. When this card's effect is activated, switch it to Defense Powition. This card's Battle Position cannot be switched until your next Standby Phase.Easily OP. Make it discard 2 cards and pay at least 200 LP. [spoiler=Card 5]Fine and balanced just a few OCG errors and its pic is a tini bit fuzzy (I'll do the other cards later) But please do not use fake types and give it duel types. If you want it to be two types it goes in the effect "This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster" or whatever type you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luvablekitten Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 (I'll do the other cards later) But please do not use fake types and give it duel types. lovely i respect your comments but with all due respect i can invent any sort of type i want considering they are MY ideas and opinions of MY cards i admit i have loads of ocg (still have no idea what that is but ohwell. guessing it is mistakes )and on my Princess's garment i just forgot to type discard the equipped monster to the graveryard at the end of your turn' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 The pics and OCG need monumental help. Good try though. Don't give up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 (I'll do the other cards later) But please do not use fake types and give it duel types. lovely i respect your comments but with all due respect i can invent any sort of type i want considering they are MY ideas and opinions of MY cards i admit i have loads of ocg (still have no idea what that is but ohwell. guessing it is mistakes )and on my Princess's garment i just forgot to type discard the equipped monster to the graveryard at the end of your turn' Oh..Well: 1) I'm sorry if I came off rude, its just the way I talk.2) Sorry I just get iffy with threads that use fake types without warning and explanation. And with all do respect, alot of the time it should be explained since this is the reaslistic card section which deals with actual cards which means actual types but its fine to post fake types but its alot less of a chance of being assaulted for it.3) I can help you out if you PM me your cards and their effects for me to fix? Again I'm really sorry if I came off as rude. I didn't mean to sound so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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