thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 The best one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 do not make Divine types or DIVINE attributes, plus you didn't even say what monsters are needed to summon it (even if we overlook OCG errors) 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 well ive made this card more accesible ( if u understand my english ) and the monsters u need to summon is 3 any cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 yeah but Divines are not a good idea, you're new so you didn't know that, so I suggest you change the attribute and type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 The OCG is completely off, so I can't even begin to know where to fix.Summoning conditions are OP'd, and doesn't even match a Synchro monster.The last part is also OP'd.Stats are too high.ID isn't correct.DIVINE and Divine-Beasts are gay. Get rid of them. 1/10. If this is your best, then I can't wait to see the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 lol my monster isint gay but i will change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 lol my monster isint gay but i will change it If you reread my post, I said DIVINE and Divine-Beasts are gay, not the card.lrn2read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 umm ok now here is the modified version hope its better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 you mean this card can only be special summoned by paying 1000 LP. That's WAY too easy to special summon, and in any case 4700 atk is too high for lv8 I'd drop it to lv6, and give it only 2300ish atk (unless you want to change the summoning requirements) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 dude it's level 7...I think it was better off as a synchro except without the 1000 points cost thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Also, don't put Invincible in the Description, unless it is a Vanilla for flavor text.I think I may have a fix:This card can only be Summoned by (Your choice). During your End Phase, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. The Summoning conditions are really up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Oh and halve the attack and defense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 nah i wont change this card anymorebut thanks for advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 You really need to change this card a lot though. OCG is WAY off and it is WAY OP. I quite like the pic though it has to be said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 first of all what the hell means OGC and OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 first of all what the hell means OGC and OP OCG = Official Card GrammarOP= Over-Powered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 o.Onah wont change it CAUSE MY FRIEND LIKED IT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDthundergx Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 YOUR OCG IS WAY WAY WAY OFF NEVER MAKING YOUR CARD HAVE 7 STARS AND THAT MUCH ATTACK POINTS IS NOT COOL MAKE IT LIKE 2000 ATK AND 2100 DEFENSE YOU DONT NEED THE STRONGEST CARD IS THE WORLD. NEVER MAKE A CARD HAVE 50 LIFE POINTS. WHEN YOU WRITE LIFE POINTS MAKE IT CAPITAL LIKE THIS: Life Points.DONT MAKE IT A DRAGON MAAKE IT A WINGED BEAST Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 LOL ok chil outim noob to this bussiness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 YOUR OCG IS WAY WAY WAY OFF NEVER MAKING YOUR CARD HAVE 7 STARS AND THAT MUCH ATTACK POINTS IS NOT COOL MAKE IT LIKE 2000 ATK AND 2100 DEFENSE YOU DONT NEED THE STRONGEST CARD IS THE WORLD. NEVER MAKE A CARD HAVE 50 LIFE POINTS. WHEN YOU WRITE LIFE POINTS MAKE IT CAPITAL LIKE THIS: Life Points.DONT MAKE IT A DRAGON MAAKE IT A WINGED BEAST Lolwut? Carder, he's a noob too. Don't worry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 okkkkk...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 MY FRIEND LIKED IThe must be a noob then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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