Theworm55 is the best he told me how to improve this card look at it now!

[Nickoboy1]

[Zauls]

That is better! Thanks for giving me credit!

11/10

[Nickoboy1]

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do u think this card is good?

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I tryed to balance it and remove most OCG error.

[zombiepromking]

First one is awesomesauce second needs work, if the card produced a semi-difficult to destroy token, it would make sense.

 

8.6/10 - Deserve this, first is good but you're new so the second one isn't accounted for until you get some help with it.

[Nickoboy1]

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i've improved it slightly.

[Cyber-Valley™]

OCG, Pay 1000 Life Points. Every time your opponent draws a FIRE monster, it autimatically gets sent to the Graveyard. When your opponent attacks with a WATER monster destroy this card.

[Nickoboy1]

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this card is quite good but i need to improve the pic soz!

[herbie]

lol you can't attack a spell card

[Nickoboy1]

i know that is a intresting effect that is why i made it.

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this is my improved finished "evil grin" card

[ragnarok1945]

better in terms of OCG, weird effects though.

 

The pictures look great, so you get 8/10