thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Nice Job, dude.Your a Newb and you have a that good OCG...You have some errors..but these are that easy to solve that this is close to perfect..=) oponent = opponentatack points = ATK and things like turm..just normal Grammar errors. This should be the Correct OCG:This card can only be activated, if your opponent Summons a Fire-Type monster. Destroy the monster and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. Draw 3 cards in your next Draw Phase. =) Nice idea..Great Pic 9/10 Edit: Trap Cards cannot be Quick Spells ;) Its a Normal Trap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iSTIX Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 It has some misspellings: opponent(s), destroys and attack. Also put an apostrophe s on monsters. Also capitalize the ff: Deck and Trap. The pic is good, but the card is 50/50, but good work for your first Trap Card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecarder Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Thank you all and wow 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 I'm amazed you all missed the Fire-Type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 xD,...lol..i fortgot it to..xD its FIRE monster..not Fire-Type xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cok_pis_bakar Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 good card :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 very good OCG, the errors have already been pointed out, and the effect is relatively balanced 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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