Nosferatu Reaper Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 I'm not sure if the OCG is OK so if you find any errors please tell mehope you like it[spoiler=[font=Arial]Lore[/font]]When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned destroy all face-up monsters on the field except this monster. Then, your opponent can Special Summon Level 4 or lower monsters from their Deck equal to the number of your opponent's monsters that were destroyed by this effect. As long as this card remains face-up on you side of the field all monsters on your opponent's side of the field gain 400 ATK and cannot be destroyed by battle. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field your opponent cannot Normal Summon any Level 4 or lower monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarl Ballin Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 The last effect is a bit Op'd. The average 4 star monster has 1600 ATK and if your monsters (plus that card) are gaining 500 ATK and your opponent cant Normal Summon, that turns into a quick win. So I suggest you just get rid of the last effect or balance it in someway. Other than that and a few OCG errors, it's good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Minor OCG/Grammar errors. Can't exactly point them out without using the whole effect. Pic is awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosferatu Reaper Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 ok I fixed itHope it's more balanced nowplease comment and rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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