Riku Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Nah to the people hate me or to that its me? Opalmoon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Nah, it isn't you. Or Opal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Oh forgot to mention this poem is touching too Princey.. (lol)a friend helping a friend.. it's great... ^^ heart warming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Hm.... is it KAJN? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 stop guessing Thanks princessy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Nice Job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 stop guessing Thanks princessy -.-; makes no sense at all Princey... u got any tips on how to make good poems? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 make sure it flows, rhymes are your friend, and only write when you have something to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 ah i see thanks 4 da help.. i might try to right one.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 awesome poem i get the meaning but don't know who its about i think its better that way though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dictator7 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 A little. Some parts are more strange than others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 thanks for making a good poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 no problem. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 I want to read more you are very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 HABEEB IT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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