Sid. Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 [align=center] I feel cold as walk through the ice. My skin gets colder and colder, as I approach the water. I somehow open my frosted mouth and move my iced tongue as if it were still working, and ask myself, "What am I doing?" I walk closer, and as my foot pierces the frosted fortress of water, I feel a sudden shock, and jump into the water. And for some reason, I don't feel cold anymore. I feel as if I had lost my weight, but I couldn't float. My whole body feels numb, and I feel the warmth of my body leave, and slam the door behind me. I open my mouth again, but this time, words don't come out. I suddenly gather up all my strength, and I get out of the near frozen water. When I get out of the water, I feel much colder. I feel as if a thousand ice shards are sticking to my body, but I can still move. As I'm brushing off the ice, a few pierce my skin. No blood comes out, and I don't feel pain. Am I numb? Did I get frostbite? As I finally get the water out of my eyes, and I can finally see again, I see everyone there. My mother, my dad. My friends, and my family. Their all there, congratulating me on graduation. Everyone is there, my classmates, my friends, my family, my love. Their all there, clapping, for me. I wish I could feel a sudden warmth fall over me, but still cold. My mom gets up, and brings a cake. Feeling cold, I put my face above the candles. I donut feel warmth, even though the candles are burning bright. And suddenly, everyone's gone again. I'm still wet, and freezing. I'm in a barren wasteland, no where too go, nothing too see. I sit on the ground, hugging myself and crying, because I miss everyone I love. I'll never see them again. I close my eyes. I open them again. I'm in the water, again, and im drifting. Downwards. The light near the top gets smaller and smaller. I think about all my memories in my life that I've had. All the people I've met, and all the friends I've made. Only wish i could do it again, if i had one more chance. I'm drifting, into darkness.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilhorus Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 O_O Wow. I dont get it, but thats good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 WTF? But i guess it's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 DON'T DIE SID, DON'T DIE. But it's really good. Although the 'cold' water part gets repeated too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Emo. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 I don't get it. Are you dead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Dying, i suppose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 OH NOES! DON'T DIE NOW SID!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Dying' date=' i suppose[/quote'] I'm drifting, into darkness. Nah, I think he's dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Aw, damn it. Why die now........why not die after my birthday when you give me a gyft DX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 selfish. :/ Hes falling into, meaning dying. If he fell, that means hes dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 selfish. :/ Hes falling into' date=' meaning dying. If he fell, that means hes dead.[/quote'] He'll die sooner or later. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Hes not dead yet, though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilhorus Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Sid.'s away reason: Reason: Most of the time im off the forum' date=' i still have my Gmail up. Feel free to Pm me, i'll respond as fast as possible. If i dont, im most likely working on something, out with friends, or [b']dead.[/b] He might possibly be dead. =( Unlikely, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 O_O Wow. I dont get it' date=' but thats good.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 For cryin' out loud, get Manny to help you out of there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 I'd say its time for you to warm up.but, anyways. I place the classic "Cool story, bro!" here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilhorus Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 For cryin' out loud' date=' get Manny to help you out of there.[/quote'] [/thread] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 dont be a troll. >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 For cryin' out loud' date=' get Manny to help you out of there.[/quote'] xDDDD Serious LMAO material. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Holy sheet im not dead >_>It was just a little story i created, when at first i was gonna write a poem about being in the ice age because my names "Sid", getting it? But what you guys seriously havent figured out is that the character in the story died as soon as he got into the water. Thats why he thought he got out and had his whole family there in a barren wasteland. Also hunter, im not emo ;D If you guys want moar, i can write another one in a week or so. Aw' date=' damn it. Why die now........why not die after my birthday when you give me a gyft DX[/b'] xDDont worry about it man, i'll get it too ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Less short words more big words.Eh story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Less short words more big words.Eh story. That is what i wanted to hear =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 It was just a little story i created' date=' when at first [b']i was gonna write a poem about being in the ice age because my names "Sid", getting it? [/b] For cryin' out loud' date=' get Manny to help you out of there.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 It was just a little story i created' date=' when at first [b']i was gonna write a poem about being in the ice age because my names "Sid", getting it? [/b] For cryin' out loud' date=' get Manny to help you out of there.[/quote'] Lol. Any other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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