Timborlin Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cok_pis_bakar Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 OGC is very bad.pic is not bad. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timborlin Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 And this one ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iSTIX Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Capitalize Normal Summoned and Special Summoned, and these are the right spellings. Also, destroyed is the correct spelling. The OCG is not that good, but good try for your one of your first cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 offer to the doomed is a great idea for a cardi know it might be stupid but i kinda think the name is pretty badalso you might want to crop the picture so it fits better and isnt stretchedalso your OCG needs a little work but that's okit really has potential8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timborlin Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 And this monster, it is my best and the Ritual card is "Paladin Ritual" you see it when you scroll to the begin of the page.(I come from Holland my English is not very good)I have changed my "Offer to the doom" into this card (I still have my "Offer to the Doom" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Return of Dragon's effect is too bland OCG is ok for your early cards 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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