BriaErik Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Nice or what ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mordred.jr Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 this card is pretty balanced out except u need some kind of drawback to inflict damage8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BriaErik Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 ok thanks for the tip Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iSTIX Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Capitalize Field. Put some apostrophe s's in some parts of the cards. The cards are OK, but you need to improve your OCG JUST a bit:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BriaErik Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 ok thanks i am a bit retarded at english cause im from hungary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 I would put a drawback to it. Like something that benfits you, but then it benefits your opponet. Otherwise, people will say its OPED. This is good work though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 doesn't really seem too OP'd but personally id change it to "Once per turn you can remove 1 Dragon-type monster in your Graveyard from play to inflict 1000 points of direct damage to your opponent's Lifepoints."also your OCG is a little off, just look at other ritual cards and copy the first part about the summoning requirements, that way you dont have to worry about being wrong ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BriaErik Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 ok thanks for all the tips and the last one is very help full thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Need to change the OCG, lots of errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 The second image would go well for a "Cyber Dark" monster. Be a good Fusion/ Union for Cyber Dark Dragon. Anyway. 'his', so girls don't play Yugioh? his-his/her-her = their. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BriaErik Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 oh yeah thanks imjust noob to this bizok modified in the first post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Dragon Empress needs a drawback to better balance it out 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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