skateing Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 i hope you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 Small grammar problems fire should be capitalized type should be capitalized and the name should be capitalized.PM me if you need help on anything else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 The effects are undisclosed and bad OCG.Nice try!!Nice card,I know you can do a lot better!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unskilled Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 The OCG needs correcting..It could be misleading. However, the idea of the card is quite clever. 5.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 bad ocgshould be when this card is normal summoned or set something like that, not when this card is activated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyingdagger8 Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 Bad OCG because when you say "give 500 life points to.." who is getting the LP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda_Cosgrove14 Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 Sorry, but the pic is really lame. If you fix the pic, then it would be awsome.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skateing Posted November 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 im gonna fix the card right now and thanks for telling me whats wrong everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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