snake1111123 Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 plz tell me if its good enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 there are a few problems1) i've seen the pic before but it's good2) pple around here don't like normal monsters so i'd change it to effect3) it's way oped(overpowered) a 1 star monsters can't have a 3550 attack and 2000 defense I can't say it's bad for a new card.. but it could use improvement6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snake1111123 Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 ok heres my updated one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 ok well i forgot to mention.. no divine beasts... pple also don't like itand the stars and attack and defense is betternow lose the divine beast and civine attribute... make it and EARTH or DARK attributeand make it's type either Beast or Fiend.. and slap an effect on it..also ur first post if u look along the bottom of it u'll see edit.. edit the 1st post...and replace the card with the updated one..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 without any supports or effects, it's too weak that and the fact it's divine makes it even worse 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mintcookie Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 No effect -1Divine -1Decent pictureGrammar errorsBad description1.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snake1111123 Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 ok heres my updated one. sry i didnt know where the edit button is so heres this card and another card called chimera. sry 4 the pic of chimera its the only good picture i can find.plz rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 your misspelled fiend Chimera's effect is WAY too bland, it needs another one (and that's OCG errors aside) 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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