theidiot234 Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 (rate plz) ty. and um sry about the funny crap earlier on my first thread and thxs for the tip. :D thxs for the tips and where did i went wrong like grammar -_-" lol. also if u have any ideas pm me thxs :P EDIT:or u can im me using aim or meebo. add me my sn is: theidiot234 LOL! tell me if ur from the forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unskilled Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 First card is fine, fairly similar to lord of D. Second card is overpowered. Cards like BEWD would have 9000 Atk power and that just ruins the duel...Although you have tried to make it more fair, so i'll give you credit for that. My advice would be to change it to "double the atk, after three turns this card is destroyed with the equipped monster" and keep the end bit of the effect Not a bad first attempt but needs a fair bit of work. 2.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theidiot234 Posted November 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 First card is fine' date=' fairly similar to lord of D. Second card is overpowered. Cards like BEWD would have 9000 Atk power and that just ruins the duel...Although you have tried to make it more fair, so i'll give you credit for that. My advice would be to change it to "double the atk, after three turns this card is destroyed with the equipped monster" and keep the end bit of the effect Not a bad first attempt but needs a fair bit of work. 2.4/10[/quote']thxs :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niht Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 Not bad ideas but bad grammar. Like on the second one it should be summoned not summon. 2/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinz Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 Nice cards mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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