C.F.Yuji Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 [spoiler=Toon][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, This card can only be Special Summoned if you control 1 face-up "Toon World". When "Toon World" is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent does not control a face-up "Toon" Monster, this card can attack directly. If you control another "Toon" Monster, this card inflicts Piercing Damage. lol, This time of one of my favorite cards, Hiita! XD. Image was part of a bigger image I used in my Charmer cards topic, "Hiita's Army" but it definitely looks Tooney enough XD. Oh yes, Ya can't say that I couldn't put in "This card inflicts piercing damage" just cause no other card says it, Cyberdark Horn disagrees :P, so the effect may be so-so, But it's 8:40 AM and I can't think straight XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 "this card inflicts Double Damage wow good card...pic is ok..8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 -This card can only be Special Summoned when "Toon World" is on your side of the field = This card can only be Special Summoned if you control "Toon World" -If you control 1 face-up "Toon World" and your opponent does not control a face-up Toon monster... get rid of this part, because it's obvious you'll be controlling "Toon World", since this monster is on the Field. -On the third sentence (in the Lore), the last word, put Toon in " " The pic is SO not a Toon monster, replace it, as well the effect is VERY BLAND! you added nothing but the Piercing Damage! have another try. 3.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightStriker Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 Nice card I gave you 10/10 rating really original effect though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 -This card can only be Special Summoned when "Toon World" is on your side of the field = This card can only be Special Summoned if you control "Toon World" -If you control 1 face-up "Toon World" and your opponent does not control a face-up Toon monster... get rid of this part' date=' because it's obvious you'll be controlling "Toon World", since this monster is on the Field. -On the third sentence (in the Lore), the last word, put Toon in " " The pic is SO not a Toon monster, replace it, as well the effect is VERY BLAND! you added nothing but the Piercing Damage! have another try. 3.7/10[/quote'] lol, Fixed the OCG you mentioned somewhat. Also, the pic looks like a Toon Hiita to me, Unless I can find a better one, it's sticking around :P, Also, it's a Toon Form of "Familiar-Possessed - Hiita" which can inflict piercing damage, and Toons are, in a way, the same as their original's, But look goofy. Nice card I gave you 10/10 rating really original effect though lol' date=' Thanks."this card inflicts Double Damage wow good card...pic is ok..8/10 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 The OCG was the most thing bothering me, with that fixed I'll raise my rate to 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 lol, Wow, I didn't think the OCG was that bad, well, the attack directly with Toon World thing bothered me a bit, as you need Toon World to summon her, but I never really bothered to change it unless someone mentioned it XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silverathan Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 I really like the pic and effectit MIGHT be a LITTLE OP'dbut otherwise good9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 I really like the pic and effectit MIGHT be a LITTLE OP'dbut otherwise good9.5/10 It's not, all Toon monsters have those effects of attacking directly. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Manga_Ryu-Ran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 lol, Indeed they do, And I try to keep the Toon effects close to what they are :P XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 bland effect, it needs another one picture isn't very toon like anyway 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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