breann101 Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 Hey guys.Now you have seen my ROSE ARCHETYPE Deck that i started. Now my friend has started an ANGEL ARCHETYPE Deck. "Angel 07"+ "Harvest Angel of Wisdom"During your Standby Phase inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card with "Angel" in the card name on your field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field neither player can change the battle positions of monsters on the field. here is the card. please she is new to this site so help her out alittle bit. And hey, you'll even be helping me out^_- Ok Guys Currently still working on the effect the pic edit owes a big thank you to Seto Kaiba666. He found the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 OMG. Pic is bad and the OCG needs to work on. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 balanced but the name of the card sounds like a spell or trap card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 OMG. Pic is bad and the OCG needs to work on. 4/10 No offense' date=' but i really dont think you know what you're talking about. There are NO ocg errors and does it really matter what the pic looks like?? A 6 star one of my friends happens to say its really good. And please do tell me where in gods name do you see OCG errors/[hr']balanced but the name of the card sounds like a spell or trap card So do you think we should change the name then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 OMG. Pic is bad and the OCG needs to work on. 4/10 No offense' date=' but i really dont think you know what you're talking about. There are NO ocg errors and does it really matter what the pic looks like?? A 6 star one of my friends happens to say its really good. And please do tell me where in gods name do you see OCG errors/[hr']balanced but the name of the card sounds like a spell or trap card So do you think we should change the name then? yes, something like "The Angel of Purity" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 OMG. Pic is bad and the OCG needs to work on. 4/10 No offense' date=' but i really dont think you know what you're talking about. There are NO ocg errors and does it really matter what the pic looks like?? A 6 star one of my friends happens to say its really good. And please do tell me where in gods name do you see OCG errors/[hr']balanced but the name of the card sounds like a spell or trap card So do you think we should change the name then? yes' date=' something like "The Angel of Purity"[/quote'] We like that, "The Angel of Purity" has kind of a ring to it. Thank you for knowing what your talking about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 I'd take the Divine part out. Other than that it's good if you're going for sub-Types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 remove the Divine type, you should have that in there other than that it's a reasonable start 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Thank you to both of you! You've been a great help and soon i will have the updat up^_^ THANKS!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 OMG. Pic is bad and the OCG needs to work on. 4/10 what? you need thicker glasses. OCG is fine it just has a bad effect. its too simple and doesnt do diddly. more practice thats all i guess. btw, the pic matters because your making a card. if you were doing written cards thats different but try to find good pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 OMG. Pic is bad and the OCG needs to work on. 4/10 what? you need thicker glasses. OCG is fine it just has a bad effect. its too simple and doesnt do diddly. more practice thats all i guess. btw' date=' the pic matters because your making a card. if you were doing written cards thats different but try to find good pics.[/quote'] Well here's the thing, I thought we found lots of good pix, but only that one seemed to match the title just right when the second person who comemnted the card gave us the new name. It was "Angel's Light" but as you noticed, the title we have now fit the picture better. idk though, still new to this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scyire Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Angel 07 + Harvest Angel of Wisdom should equal UBER PWNAGE.Angel 07 alone has higher attack and a much better effect than this card.OCG errors, and not-so-good pic.1/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Angel 07 + Harvest Angel of Wisdom should equal UBER PWNAGE.Angel 07 alone has higher attack and a much better effect than this card.OCG errors' date=' and not-so-good pic.1/5[/quote'] the card was origonly a god card.... but we had to change it. So obviusly there so bugs that still need to be worked out. Thanx i didnt notice that Angel 07 was that strong i will fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 .:BUMP:. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KdogPrime Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 This card is really good, but you might want to consider changing the "Angel's Light" in the card text to match it's new name. :) And just one little thing, there should be a plus sign between the two Fusion ingredient monsters, instead of a comma. Very nicely done. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 ahh see i knew something else was wrong wit hit! Thank you so much!Card is still in the works. I need to change "Angel 07" to a weaker monster and i need to find a less bland effect, Any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vadim26 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Very nice card. Kicks a lot of ass for a cute little angel thingy haha. 9/10! :D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 @vadim26 Thanks^_^ Im glad at lest one person says the effect is good lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 The effect is a little plain but still good. The pic is pretty good except that it has that border. There aren't any OCG errors. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 The effect is a little plain but still good. The pic is pretty good except that it has that border. There aren't any OCG errors. 8.5/10 The pic has been edited. And i am currently working on the effect causei do agree it is blaned. But it wa s12 am and i was tired still am infact lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 The pic looks much better now. I'll raise to 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 YAY^_^ Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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