TwistedFlameApe Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 I was just making this card and decided to make a collection of cards that have wild effects that may or may not do what you'd expect. this is the first card to the collection. it simply has an increase ATK effect but in a unique way. ill add more cards to the collection soon. enjoy and plz leave comments on this card or others i could make. [align=center][spoiler=Monsters]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned unless you have 3 or more unoccupied Monster Card Zones. Your opponent cannot Summon monsters unless they have 3 or more unoccupied Monset Card Zones. This card is destroyed during your End Phase if you have more than 2 monsters on your field. Increase the ATK of this card by 600 for each unoccupied Monster Card Zone on the field. Once per turn you can Tribute 1 monster on your field and draw 1 card. During the End Phase of each player's turn, Special Summon 1 "Chaotic Breed Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 200/DEF 100) to either player's field in Defense Position. "Chaotic Breed Tokens" are destroyed during the End Phase of the next turn after they are Summoned. Once per turn you can equip this card to a face-up monster your opponent controls (this effect cannot be activated if this card is equipped to a monster by its own effect). Take control of the equipped monster and increase its ATK by 400. As long as this card is equipped to a monster by its own effect your opponent cannot use 1 of their Monster Card Zones. Special Summon this card when the equipped monster is removed from the field. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent the damage becomes equal to the difference between both player's Life Points. Destroy this card during your End Phase if your opponent's Life Points are higher than yours. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all monsters Summoned are Summoned to the respective owner's opponent's side of the field. When this card is destroyed put it face-up in your opponent's Deck and shuffle it. When your opponent draws this card, it is Special Summoned on your side of the field in face-up Defense Position. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 I only see ONE chaos card, so this only gets a max of 2000 atk anyway You should put some restrictions on the tokens 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 -.- it says in the first post that ill add more as i make them. so should i up the ATk he gets from the zones or what? and as in make the tokens go to 1 side or the other but not both? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 I'm saying you should have said the tokens can't be used for tribute summons as a restriction or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 oh okay i see. ill change them shortly and edit. oh wait. u misunderstood. my card gains ATK for opponents unused zones as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 No, the tokens dosen't need to be restricted. You summon them to your opponent's field too so this balance it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 and I'd make it 600 atk for each unoccupied monster zone since I don't expect anymore than 3 unoccupied zones for this anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 No' date=' the tokens dosen't need to be restricted. You summon them to your opponent's field too so this balance it.[/quote']Aight 2 opinions. not being able to tribute them would put his effect at a disadvantage but hold off your opponent. not doing it would fuel him but give opponent weak monsters. either of those sound better to any1? and I'd make it 600 atk for each unoccupied monster zone since I don't expect anymore than 3 unoccupied zones for this anywayu realize he gets ATK for opponents zones too right? and u still believe that 600 is a good ATK increaser? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 rule of thumb, attack is far from EVERYTHING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 rule of thumb' date=' attack is far from EVERYTHING[/quote'] very true. however. his only other effect is to draw 1 card per turn. if you think thats enought hen by all means ill chang ehim to 600. whats your opinion on zeaux's comment on the tokens? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 problem is if there's no restrictions on the tokens and it goes to your opponent's side of the field, who's to say your opponent won't use them for tribute and sychron summons? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 true. u dont gotta send them to your opponent tho. it says either side of the field. would it be too powerful if i said only your opponent couldnt tribute them? maybe i can say that theyre destroyed at the thend of the turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 ive added the 2nd card to my collection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Hmmi think i like them^_^ Good idea love Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 i was hoping for an "out there" set of effects so any ideas from ppl are appreciated. if some1 would plz look specifically at Ultima's txt i would appreciate it. the effect is alright in my opinion but id like a review on it w/ some ideas to make it better. and a possible name change? whadda ya think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 thanks for the rate. 3rd card in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 i like the 3rd card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 true. u dont gotta send them to your opponent tho. it says either side of the field. would it be too powerful if i said only your opponent couldnt tribute them? maybe i can say that theyre destroyed at the thend of the turn. that would be far more useful, you going to do that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 true. u dont gotta send them to your opponent tho. it says either side of the field. would it be too powerful if i said only your opponent couldnt tribute them? maybe i can say that theyre destroyed at the thend of the turn. that would be far more useful' date=' you going to do that?[/quote'] umm. are you refering to the tokens being destroyed at the end of the next turn? since they get summoned at the end phase itd be dumb to destroy them right then but anywayz. is that what u meant? if so then ya ill make that change. i could do the other 1 too tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 in the meantime your Chaotic Vipent's pic looks best, and the effects and OCG is balanced enough to get 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 thanks =) i worked hard on that pic. card updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 I like the effect for the 4th card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 any1 got any comments on the pic for card #4? i dont think it goes with the rest of the collection.my fifth card has been posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 your Chaotic Virus card has too bland of an effect, give it another one 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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