dabomb9990jr Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 [align=center]Tampering Mind Control[/align][align=left] Select one monster on your oppenent's side of the field. That monster switches control during each players turn. Each time the monster is under your control pay 800 life points. While the monster is under your control it gains 300 ATK and DEF.align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 this is merely a slightly stronger version of Change of Heart, which makes it too powerful anyway 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 OP'ed some OCG errors?2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 umm wat they said..2.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 So when it is your opponent's turn does it go back to their side of the field?very similar concept to Mark of the Rose but it could work6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 "That monster is goes on your side of the field during your turn"Remove the IS Otherwise, its a perfectly good card (but its been done before). 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Meh a okay OCG job for a new member, With a name like that i hoped for somthing a bit more elaborate. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dabomb9990jr Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 im going to add a life points deduction and fix the grammer issues thanks for the comments it really helps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diaboli Mors Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 this is merely a slightly stronger version of Change of Heart' date=' which makes it too powerful anyway 2/10[/quote'] Yeah pretty much. the title is cool and the pic is really cool so...8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dabomb9990jr Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 i edited the card so its all fixed and thanks for the comments but can you guys give me ideas for cards. The theme im working on right now is a whole secret army from the edge of the world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zkaiser Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Well since they're secret they would pop out of unexpected places. Maye you could have them revolve around Summoning themselves from abstract areas. "Do this to summon this monster from your hand," "Do this to Special Summon this monster from your Deck," "Do this to Special Summon this monster from your Graveyard" and so on and so forth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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