BoltDragon Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 :D READ-READ-READ:D :This are my first cards. I think theyre unbalanced, Im not shure. Its still Incomplete. PM me if you think there is an OverPowered one. Hope you like them :) I will update, but not so often...Description: Many powerful Fusion/Synchronization monsters come in this set, but it has few and weak Spell/Trap cards. [spoiler=Monster Cards (And 2 Ritual cards)] [spoiler=Spell/Trap Cards] ---------------------------------------------------------------------08/16/09-UPDATE!I made some new cards. The Spell card is the same as "Level Up!"Here they go, hope you like them!: [spoiler=08/16/09 New Cards]Now thats drastic changing isnt it :) ? ---------------------------------------------------------------------08/18/09-UPDATE!Fixed the OverPowered card, Ultimate Knight God. Thanks to Deustodo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 you should post the card in a spoiler, anyway some of picture I already see, the effects are good, just the Mythogos Ultimate Knight God is over powered. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 you should post the card in a spoiler' date=' anyway some of picture I already see, the effects are good, just the Mythogos Ultimate Knight God is over powered. 8/10.[/quote']CORRECTION: "Anyways Ive seen some of the pictures already"How do you post in a spoiler? And thank for the advice about the Mythogo(you mean Ultimate Knight God, do you?) Ill fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosferatu Reaper Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 you should post the card in a spoiler' date=' anyway some of picture I already see, the effects are good, just the Mythogos Ultimate Knight God is over powered. 8/10.[/quote']CORRECTION: "Anyways Ive seen some of the pictures already"How do you post in a spoiler? And thank for the advice about the Mythogo(you mean Ultimate Knight God, do you?) Ill fix it. [spoiler=Insert tittle here]Insert content here[/spoiler]and this is how it should see:[spoiler=Insert tittle here]Insert content here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 you should post the card in a spoiler' date=' anyway some of picture I already see, the effects are good, just the Mythogos Ultimate Knight God is over powered. 8/10.[/quote']CORRECTION: "Anyways Ive seen some of the pictures already"How do you post in a spoiler? And thank for the advice about the Mythogo(you mean Ultimate Knight God, do you?) Ill fix it. [spoiler=Insert tittle here]Insert content here[/spoiler]and this is how it should see:[spoiler=Insert tittle here]Insert content hereThanks Nosferatu! Ill post them in a spoiler then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
feline card maker Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 nice cards [spoiler=click here to see my rating]teehee you missed[spoiler=click this now!]8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikacio Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Nice where did you find those pictures?nice 7/10P.S.Its Kings warriors and you should put the card normal becasue tuners have a efect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 I found them around ineternet and Google Images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jsena Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 the cards are either too weak or too strong3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 ... Thank very much, I appreciate it :D (Itry to keep myself positive :D) You wont make me angry by saying that :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
121092 Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Is good but a ritual is not a synchro they are summoned by ritual spell cards you should fix that. Other than that they were nice.6/10 ^^ good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 These cards are very poor and needed severe assistance. The OCG is terrible, the pics are overused/poor, and almost all of these cards are Normal Monsters (so you should give them effects). Since I'm the new leader of the N.D.L., I'll set an example and correct all the OCG errors in these cards. [spoiler=OCG Fixes]Crimsios This is a Dragon-Type monster. Also, Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters Hydragon This is a Sea Serpent-Type monster. This would be a WATER monster. Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Sea Serpent-Type monstersThis card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. Lightiaud This is a Dragon-Type monster. Also, Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters Lodum This is a DARK Dragon-Type monster. Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters Watross This is a Dragon-Type monster. Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters Urgus This is a Dragon-Type monster. Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters Grandos Draco Don't make DIVINE monsters, this is a Dragon-Type monster, this card is overpowered, the summoning conditions are all wrong and the effect is too simple. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "[insert R.S.C. name here]". This card gains 200 ATK for each removed from play card. Mythogos Fake type, incorrect summoning conditions, overpowered. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Call of the Dark". If this card attacks your opponent directly, your opponent cannot activate Spell and Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. Call of the Dark Needs to be a Ritual Spell Card, incorrect OCG. This card is used to Ritual Summon "Mythogos, Dark Warrior". You must also offer Spellcaster-Type monsters as a Tribute whose total Levels equal 9 or more from the field or your hand. Mythogos, Dark Warrior Servant Change name to Mythogos' Servant. As long as "Mythogos, Dark Warrior" remains face-up on the field, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally. Mythogos, Light Paladin See "Mythogos, Dark Warrior". This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Call of the Light". If this card attacks your opponent directly, your opponent cannot activate Spell and Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. Call of the Light See "Call of the Dark" This card is used to Ritual Summon "Mythogos, Light Paladin". You must also offer Spellcaster-Type monsters as a Tribute whose total Levels equal 9 or more from the field or your hand. Mythogos, Light Paladin Servant Change name to "Paladin's Servant". This is a WATER Dragon-Type monster. And the effect is identical to the other servant. Be more inventive. Mythogos, Ultimate Knight-God Don't make DIVINE monsters, fake type, underpowered. "Mythogos, Dark Warrior" + "Mythogos, Light Paladin"When this card is removed from the field, this card's controller loses 3500 Life Points. The Reliable Dragon No Type, this would be a Dragon-Type monster. This card's ATK is equal to halve this card's controller's Life Points. Phoenix Boring name, overused pic, fake Type, Vanilla. King Warriors Change name to "King's Warriors", Vanilla. Moon Fairy Overpowered. This card's DEF is equal to the number of cards in your Graveyard x 300. Total Lightiaud This is an Effect Monster, Dragon-Type, most overused pic on this site, dull effect. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 "Lightiaud, The Feared" you control. This card cannot be removed from the field by a Spell Card effect. Golem's Barrier Change to an Effect Monster: (Rock-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 0/DEF 2000) with the following effect. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set when you control no monsters. When you control 2 or more monsters, this card is destroyed. Pegasus Equip only to a "Mythogos" monster. During each of your Standby Phases, select 1 card in your Graveyard and add it to your hand. If the equipped monster is a Warrior-Type monster, the equipped monster gains 1000 ATK, until the third End Phase after this effect was activated. Phoenix Reborn No such thing as Counter Spell Cards, this is a Normal Spell Card. Discard 1 card from your hand. Add 1 FIRE monster with 1500 or lower ATK from your Graveyard to your hand. Floating Castle No such thing as Equip Trap Cards, this is a Normal Trap Card. Activate only when a monster your opponent controls declares an attack. Monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle, until your End Phase. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) Torment Dragon Lv.2 If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Deck. Torment Dragon Lv.5 Overpowered. When this card is Summoned, you can remove 2 cards in your hand from play. If you do, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) If "Torment Dragon LV2" was Tributed to Tribute Summon this card, this card gains 500 ATK and DEF. Torment Dragon Lv.8 Overpowered. If "Torment Dragon LV5" was Tributed to Tribute Summon this card, this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle, you can remove 1 card in your hand from play. If you do, Special Summon the destroyed monster to your side of the field. Pay 1000 Life Points during each of your End Phases. If you do not, this card is destroyed. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all monsters Special Summoned by this card's effect. Evolution Orb Inventive, but overpowered. Tribute 1 "LV" monster you control. Special Summon 1 "LV" monster whose name includes the Tributed monster's name from your Deck in Attack Position, ignoring the Summoning conditions. Pay Life Points equal to the Summoned monster's Level x 200. You need to work on your OCG, card making skills and general English. 0/10 Also P.S.Its Kings warriors and you should put the card normal becasue tuners have a efect Incorrect. "Tune Warrior" is a Normal Tuner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
feline card maker Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 that's quite a bit of synchro's at the top don't you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Is good but a ritual is not a synchro they are summoned by ritual spell cards you should fix that. Other than that they were nice.6/10 ^^ good job What do you mean with "Not a synchro they are summoned by ritual"what card do you mean? These cards are very poor and needed severe assistance. The OCG is terrible' date=' the pics are overused/poor, and almost all of these cards are Normal Monsters (so you should give them effects). Since I'm the new leader of the N.D.L., I'll set an example and correct [i']all[/i] the OCG errors in these cards. [spoiler=OCG Fixes]Crimsios This is a Dragon-Type monster. Also, Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters Hydragon This is a Sea Serpent-Type monster. This would be a WATER monster. Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Sea Serpent-Type monstersThis card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. Lightiaud This is a Dragon-Type monster. Also, Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters Lodum This is a DARK Dragon-Type monster. Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters Watross This is a Dragon-Type monster. Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters Urgus This is a Dragon-Type monster. Synchros never have descriptions. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters Grandos Draco Don't make DIVINE monsters, this is a Dragon-Type monster, this card is overpowered, the summoning conditions are all wrong and the effect is too simple. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "[insert R.S.C. name here]". This card gains 200 ATK for each removed from play card. Mythogos Fake type, incorrect summoning conditions, overpowered. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Call of the Dark". If this card attacks your opponent directly, your opponent cannot activate Spell and Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. Call of the Dark Needs to be a Ritual Spell Card, incorrect OCG. This card is used to Ritual Summon "Mythogos, Dark Warrior". You must also offer Spellcaster-Type monsters as a Tribute whose total Levels equal 9 or more from the field or your hand. Mythogos, Dark Warrior Servant Change name to Mythogos' Servant. As long as "Mythogos, Dark Warrior" remains face-up on the field, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally. Mythogos, Light Paladin See "Mythogos, Dark Warrior". This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Call of the Light". If this card attacks your opponent directly, your opponent cannot activate Spell and Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. Call of the Light See "Call of the Dark" This card is used to Ritual Summon "Mythogos, Light Paladin". You must also offer Spellcaster-Type monsters as a Tribute whose total Levels equal 9 or more from the field or your hand. Mythogos, Light Paladin Servant Change name to "Paladin's Servant". This is a WATER Dragon-Type monster. And the effect is identical to the other servant. Be more inventive. Mythogos, Ultimate Knight-God Don't make DIVINE monsters, fake type, underpowered. "Mythogos, Dark Warrior" + "Mythogos, Light Paladin"When this card is removed from the field, this card's controller loses 3500 Life Points. The Reliable Dragon No Type, this would be a Dragon-Type monster. This card's ATK is equal to halve this card's controller's Life Points. Phoenix Boring name, overused pic, fake Type, Vanilla. King Warriors Change name to "King's Warriors", Vanilla. Moon Fairy Overpowered. This card's DEF is equal to the number of cards in your Graveyard x 300. Total Lightiaud This is an Effect Monster, Dragon-Type, most overused pic on this site, dull effect. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 "Lightiaud, The Feared" you control. This card cannot be removed from the field by a Spell Card effect. Golem's Barrier Change to an Effect Monster: (Rock-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 0/DEF 2000) with the following effect. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set when you control no monsters. When you control 2 or more monsters, this card is destroyed. Pegasus Equip only to a "Mythogos" monster. During each of your Standby Phases, select 1 card in your Graveyard and add it to your hand. If the equipped monster is a Warrior-Type monster, the equipped monster gains 1000 ATK, until the third End Phase after this effect was activated. Phoenix Reborn No such thing as Counter Spell Cards, this is a Normal Spell Card. Discard 1 card from your hand. Add 1 FIRE monster with 1500 or lower ATK from your Graveyard to your hand. Floating Castle No such thing as Equip Trap Cards, this is a Normal Trap Card. Activate only when a monster your opponent controls declares an attack. Monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle, until your End Phase. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) Torment Dragon Lv.2 If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Deck. Torment Dragon Lv.5 Overpowered. When this card is Summoned, you can remove 2 cards in your hand from play. If you do, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) If "Torment Dragon LV2" was Tributed to Tribute Summon this card, this card gains 500 ATK and DEF. Torment Dragon Lv.8 Overpowered. If "Torment Dragon LV5" was Tributed to Tribute Summon this card, this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle, you can remove 1 card in your hand from play. If you do, Special Summon the destroyed monster to your side of the field. Pay 1000 Life Points during each of your End Phases. If you do not, this card is destroyed. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all monsters Special Summoned by this card's effect. Evolution Orb Inventive, but overpowered. Tribute 1 "LV" monster you control. Special Summon 1 "LV" monster whose name includes the Tributed monster's name from your Deck in Attack Position, ignoring the Summoning conditions. Pay Life Points equal to the Summoned monster's Level x 200. You need to work on your OCG, card making skills and general English. 0/10 Also P.S.Its Kings warriors and you should put the card normal becasue tuners have a efect Incorrect. "Tune Warrior" is a Normal Tuner.Dude you hadnt to be so harsh :( If my english simply is disturbing to you or something you simply ignore the effects and see the cards, Im from south America man, Its impossible that you have not seen someone with worse english than me in YCM... Plus this were my first cards. Vanillas and Fake types are allowed in Pop Culture and Any Other section. The evolution orb is EXACTLY the same as "Level Up!" I copied the description! I will try to fix my cards man but you really did not had to be so rude or call me noob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Cards are okay8.3/10althjough they can be fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Dude you hadnt to be so harsh :( If my english simply is disturbing to you or something you simply ignore the effects and see the cards' date=' Im from south America man, Its impossible that you have not seen someone with worse english than me in YCM... Plus this were my first cards. Vanillas and Fake types are allowed in Pop Culture and Any Other section. The evolution orb is EXACTLY the same as "Level Up!" I copied the description! I will try to fix my cards man but you really did not had to be so rude or call me noob.[/quote'] 1) I tell the truth when I rate cards. I apologise if it is scathing, but the truth does sometimes hurt.2) The effect is possibly the most important part of a card; it can swing a card between OPed and UPed very easily. So it would be very hard for me to ignore the effect.3) I have seen poor English a lot during my time here. And each time I have posted the OCG fixes so people with poor English can learn their OCG.4) It is irrelevant that these were your first cards. The quality of people's first cards vary immensely.5) Vanillas are allowed here, but they are frowned upon; especially if they have no support.6) Fake Types may be allowed, but your Types are so close to real types you might as well change them to real types. Also, you can only justify a new type with at least a dozen cards of that type.7) As for "Evolution Orb"; why make it if it is a brazen copy?8) Like I said, I wasn't rude I was truthful.9) And I didn't call you a noob. Your mistakes are typical of inexperienced members: Newbs. There is a large difference between the two terms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 nice pic ok OCG but still amzing. 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
121092 Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 The blue cards are brought out by ritual spell cards not like the white ones called "Synchros" are. Ritual monsters usually have spells that make you offer or discard monsters whos total stars equal that of the ritual monster you are trying to summon. Synchros you sacrifice tuner monsters for. There ya go that's the difference^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted September 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 The blue cards are brought out by ritual spell cards not like the white ones called "Synchros" are. Ritual monsters usually have spells that make you offer or discard monsters whos total stars equal that of the ritual monster you are trying to summon. Synchros you sacrifice tuner monsters for. There ya go that's the difference^^Yes I know what Synchros and Rituals are but which card you mean?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
121092 Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 The blue cards are brought out by ritual spell cards not like the white ones called "Synchros" are. Ritual monsters usually have spells that make you offer or discard monsters whos total stars equal that of the ritual monster you are trying to summon. Synchros you sacrifice tuner monsters for. There ya go that's the difference^^Yes I know what Synchros and Rituals are but which card you mean??Grandos draco doesn't has synchro stuff and in the spells you need to tell that you offer monsters who's combined # of stars equal that of the monster attempted to be summoned you don't just type in their names.Just realized that on "reliable dragon" there is no type while on others there are fake types. Change bird to winged-beast, sword weilder to warrior and their is a dragon type you don't need beast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 I like the pictures:D 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UltimaAku Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Impressed by the pictures, but some of the effects make no sense and some effect monsters dont have an effect e.g. Phoenix. Also to ritual summon a ritual monster, you need aritual magic. Look for real examples like "Black Illusion Ritual" to help you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZedsAlive Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 1000/10 WOW ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vwerdiir Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 i think the card, 'Floating castle' it is the castle from the anime movie 'Howls Moving Castle' Great cards thou, loved all the Feared Dragon Cards 9/10Some OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrentTucker17 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 there ok some bad pics 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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