Old Card Updated!!!!!!

[PrimalFear]

Hey everyone here is my improved version of an old card, let me know what ya think.

 

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"1 Tuner + 1 or more LIGHT non - Tuner monster"

The original ATK of this card is equal to the combined ATK of the monsters used for the Synchro Summon. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step. During your Standby Phase, if this is the only monster you control and your opponent controls no Level 3 or lower monsters, you can add 1 Level 4 or lower monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. If you use this effect, return this card to your Extra Deck. This card cannot be Synchro Summoned during the turn it was returned to the Extra Deck. If this card is destroyed in battle with a monster with an ATK of 3000 or higher destroy 1 monster on your opponent’s field.

 

 

[ragnarok1945]

that could get well over the 4000 mark, and lv9 would be considered too low for it. You should put a max atk this card can have

 

8/10

[OMGAKITTY]

I'm not sure about the name. Frankly, it looks like some sort of Guardian spirit or something...I don't really get the "Apocalypse" vibe.

 

Change the ATK to 0.

 

The rest of the effect seems kind of...random. So if this card is the only defense on your field, you can....get rid of it, to add a (probably weaker) 4star to your hand? ....What's the point? :/

 

The effect doesn't hold together very well, it looks like you just grabbed some random effects and shoved them into this card.

[PrimalFear]

that could get well over the 4000 mark' date=' and lv9 would be considered too low for it. You should put a max atk this card can have

 

8/10

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Yeah that is true, thanks for pointing that out.

 

I'm not sure about the name. Frankly' date=' it looks like some sort of Guardian spirit or something...I don't really get the "Apocalypse" vibe.

 

Change the ATK to 0.

 

The rest of the effect seems kind of...random. So if this card is the only defense on your field, you can....get rid of it, to add a (probably weaker) 4star to your hand? ....What's the point? :/

 

The effect doesn't hold together very well, it looks like you just grabbed some random effects and shoved them into this card.

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Name is fine, it went with a set, The point is called strategy it's not hard. And no its not a bunch of effects thrown in I just couldn't figure out how to word them the right way.

 

Thanks for your posts both ya.