Kierantoocool Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Hey again :) I've just been making more cards and thought I would post them to get some feedback, oh and thanks everyone for the advice again :D The first one is my first card I made and I've already posted it in a different topic but hey, can't hurt to post again :P [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kierantoocool Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Any help or advice would be appreciated :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kierantoocool Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silverathan Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 good for first cards 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kierantoocool Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 good for first cards 9/10 Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Ya not bad for first cards, but watch out for ocg errors. You'll pick up on them soon enough. Like on the sphere of defense, you wanna say something like negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. but good for firsts. :) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kierantoocool Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Ya not bad for first cards' date=' but watch out for ocg errors. You'll pick up on them soon enough. Like on the sphere of defense, you wanna say something like negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. but good for firsts. :) 8/10[/quote'] Okay, got it I'll try to improve the OCG, thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snyperfox2003 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 good try man but be careful of your ocg7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bayweena Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 gd job but ur missing the type on the second card8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kierantoocool Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 thanks guys, yeh, I justed noticed that to :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFlaherty13 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Capitilze Light and all other attributes, gettin better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 FAIL/20 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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