uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 my newest card rate and comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unskilled Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 I like it... For once I haven't got much to say..There's nothing really wrong with it, I would use it and could use it to great ability. 9.1/10 - Pretty much perfect, great idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 Pretty much perfect' date=' great idea.[/quote'] yet i only get a nine? what could i do better?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 Special Summon needs to be capitalized. after the comma, you should put 'and' just for regular grammar reasons, you forgot to capitalize Reflection the second time you listed it, you miss spaced when listing the attributes of the card (type and attribute are hugging the commas), and the card seems a bit overpowering. Your opponent plays blue eyes, for example. All you do is play this card and BAM! Instant Blue Eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aretha Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 Special Summon needs to be capitalized. after the comma' date=' you should put 'and' just for regular grammar reasons, you forgot to capitalize Reflection the second time you listed it, you miss spaced when listing the attributes of the card (type and attribute are hugging the commas), and the card seems a bit overpowering. Your opponent plays blue eyes, for example. All you do is play this card and BAM! Instant Blue Eyes.[/quote'] Yeah. There should be some kind of cost or something to balance out the card. Maybe tributing a monster or paying a certain amount of Life Points. Other than that, it's an excellent concept. The grammar could use some touching up, but otherwise, it't great. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 how about now?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 Not bad, it's a bit better. But you're still making the same errors: After the comma, you should put 'and' just for regular grammar reasons, and you forgot to capitalize Reflection the second time you listed it. The biggest thing is, perhaps the effect should be to tribute the total number of monsters it took to summon that monster. Because still, we come back to the point of taking a Blue Eyes or God Card with little sacrifice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 Not bad' date=' it's a bit better. But you're still making the same errors: After the comma, you should put 'and' just for regular grammar reasons, and you forgot to capitalize Reflection the second time you listed it. The biggest thing is, perhaps the effect should be to tribute the total number of monsters it took to summon that monster. Because still, we come back to the point of taking a Blue Eyes or God Card with little sacrifice.[/quote'] yeah but then u can take control of Special summoned and level 4 or below monsters without any tribute..and i have fixed the Reflect (nor posted yet) but i have no idea where im suppose to put the "and"..only thing i can think off is the "ATK, DEF, level, type, attribute and effect" and there is already one there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 and goes inbetween the comma and Special Summon in the card effect. You bring a good point there. So perhaps a Life Point sacrifice would be the most balanced thing to do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 and goes inbetween the comma and Special Summon in the card effect. You bring a good point there. So perhaps a Life Point sacrifice would be the most balanced thing to do? yeah good idea..so now it takes 200 per level probably back in the grammar errors or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ozymandias08 Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 hey, all I see left is to change the times to an 'x' and you're good to go! :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinz Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 Nice cards mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 19, 2007 Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 Much better, a great card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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