Life Points set

[skypaladin]

i posted my life points card and it was kind of confusing, but this is what i wanted to go towards with it. its rather different, but it was fun making them. Comments? OCG fix?

 

 

As long as this card is face-up on the field, neither player receives Battle Damage from battles between monsters. The DEF points of all monsters on the field become the monsters’ Life Points. Monsters cannot be placed in Defense Position. Set monsters will automatically shift into face-down Attack Position. An attacked monster loses Life Points equal to the ATK points of the attacking monster. Any DEF increases will be added to a monster's current DEF value. Whenever a monster has 0 Life Points, it is sent to the Graveyard. Damage can only be dealt to the opposing player through direct attacks and card effects. Monsters that cannot be destroyed by battle have a 500 Life Point upkeep cost during a player's Standby Phase.

 

 

 

 

 

 

When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 monster that includes "Guardian" in its name with an ATK of 1500 or less in face-up Attack Position from your Deck to your side of the field. If you do not control a face-up "Life Points", this monster is destroyed.

 

 

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having exactly 3 cards that include "Guardian" in their names in your Graveyard. During the End Phase of each player's turn, this card's ATK and DEF points return to their original value. If you do not control a face-up "Life Points", this monster is destroyed.

[Zauls]

OCG needs a bit of work, but effects and pics are both amazing.

8.75/10

[ragnarok1945]

Shulin needs another effect, OCG is slightly off, but overall it's good

 

8.9/10

[skypaladin]

thanks for the ratings! but i have no idea where to start fixing ocg. could you point out one specific instance where I am way off so i can fix it?