DarthSuhail Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Hi dudes, dont know why I made this but oh well, Effect is BS. Need help to improve it! [align=center]Remove from play 2 cards from the top of your Deck. Select 1 card from your Graveyard and return it to your hand. If the card is a Monster Card, inflict 500 to both players Life Points.[/align] Thanks dudes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 pic could use some color. Effect too bland, you should give it another one. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 I think it's fine10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Effect like what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 *shrugs* maybe say if that card is a monster card inflict 500 pts of damage to your opponent or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Maybe have to pay differ mount LP for differ type card(Trap Spell Monster) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 that's fine too, you going to modify now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Yh will post the new card in a minEdited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 that's good enough, I'll raise the rate to 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 I liked it but the image can have some colors... ok don´t have any problen anyway...9.5/10I think the effect is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silverathan Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 7.564/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 For the first sentence, are you removing the cards from play or to the Graveyard? Deck should be capitilised, also, it should be "return to your hand" and i dont think you need to write Life points, put it as "inflict 500 damage". The effect is balanced but slightly bland. The pic could do with some colour of some sort. 7/10. But if the corrections are made, rating would increase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 EDIT done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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