HORUS Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Our body is lightWe are eternalOur body is loveWe are immortalOmnipotentBenevolentOur body is eternalWithout judgment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akira Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Ross are redViolets are blueI can write poemsBetter than you On a serious note: Is this another reflection of your strong religious views? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Ross are redViolets are blueI can write poemsBetter than you On a serious note: Is this another reflection of your strong religious views? Wow, Akira just beat you. Lol. But yeah, same question, mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 >.< i'm not feeling it..sorry.. not even i can understnad this one i'll tryseems ur talking bout angels but.. eh i'm prolly wrong.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 I don't understand why a wave of poems came to YCM. It's not like any of them are good/deep enough to actually be compared to actual poets. This may not be the best poem on YCM, but its the most vague. I can normally understand poems, but I really don't get this. It seems to be ABOUT religion, not bashing it, and that is not how HORUS acts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 I don't understand why a wave of poems came to YCM. It's not like any of them are good/deep enough to actually be compared to actual poets. This may not be the best poem on YCM' date=' but its the most vague. I can normally understand poems, but I really don't get this. It seems to be ABOUT religion, not bashing it, and that is not how HORUS acts.[/quote'] Yeah, HORUS is the only YCMember that can get away with being Anti-Theist (shame about me, I got warned for agreeing with an anti-religion post). HORUS is Anti-Theist, so it's got nothing to do with religion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BehindTheMask Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 ITT: Horus wins General Section. Nice Poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 As much as this pains me, HORUS wins here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Being the best poet on YCM is like being the smartest person on the short bus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Being the best poet on YCM is like being the smartest person on the short bus. +1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
「tea.leaf」 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Ross are redViolets are blueI can write poemsBetter than you On a serious note: Is this another reflection of your strong religious views? Wow' date=' Akira just beat you. Lol. But yeah, same question, mate.[/quote'] Seb is also grammatically incorrect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 If you don't understand this poem, I suggest you do some reading on Existentialist philosophy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 good, really. But the last word bombs it in a disturbing way, IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilhorus Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 good' date=' really. But the last word bombs it in a disturbing way, IMO.[/quote'] How is that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 i iz smart. i make poems about philosophies on a children's card game forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akira Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Ross are redViolets are blueI can write poemsBetter than you On a serious note: Is this another reflection of your strong religious views? Wow' date=' Akira just beat you. Lol. But yeah, same question, mate.[/quote'] Seb is also grammatically incorrect. If I used the correct grammar, it wouldn't rhyme. Poets always bend and manipulate grammar rules anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Ross are redViolets are blueI can write poemsBetter than you On a serious note: Is this another reflection of your strong religious views? Wow' date=' Akira just beat you. Lol. But yeah, same question, mate.[/quote'] Seb is also grammatically incorrect. If I used the correct grammar, it wouldn't rhyme. Poets always bend and manipulate grammar rules anyway. You still managed to misspell 'roses'. Altair, do you mean to say that I should only make unoriginal, cliched poems like every other kid on here, only because it is a Yu-Gi-Oh! forum? If you hadn't noticed, none of the other poems are remotely related to the game. Also, to be actually good at the game you've got to be at least 16 or play regularly with people of that age. Not so much of a child's card game, is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Ross are redViolets are blueI can write poemsBetter than you On a serious note: Is this another reflection of your strong religious views? Wow' date=' Akira just beat you. Lol. But yeah, same question, mate.[/quote'] Seb is also grammatically incorrect. If I used the correct grammar, it wouldn't rhyme. Poets always bend and manipulate grammar rules anyway. You still managed to misspell 'roses'. Altair, do you mean to say that I should only make unoriginal, cliched poems like every other kid on here, only because it is a Yu-Gi-Oh! forum? If you hadn't noticed, none of the other poems are remotely related to the game. Also, to be actually good at the game you've got to be at least 16 or play regularly with people of that age. Not so much of a child's card game, is it? Yes. But if you haven't noticed, more than half of the people who play it are kids. You know what I am saying, the people who walk around with gods cards thinking they are invincible for holding cardboard? DERP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 i iz smart. i make poems about philosophies on a children's card game forum. Thats the best HORUS impression i've heard all day. I'm sure that makes you feel just as good as going to locals and defeating 8-year olds at Yugioh, doesn't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Ross are redViolets are blueI can write poemsBetter than you On a serious note: Is this another reflection of your strong religious views? Wow' date=' Akira just beat you. Lol. But yeah, same question, mate.[/quote'] Seb is also grammatically incorrect. If I used the correct grammar, it wouldn't rhyme. Poets always bend and manipulate grammar rules anyway. You still managed to misspell 'roses'. Altair, do you mean to say that I should only make unoriginal, cliched poems like every other kid on here, only because it is a Yu-Gi-Oh! forum? If you hadn't noticed, none of the other poems are remotely related to the game. Also, to be actually good at the game you've got to be at least 16 or play regularly with people of that age. Not so much of a child's card game, is it? Laugh out LoudNo one would take you seriously in a forum full of idiotic "superiors" who claim that if your poem isn't as long and dull as the poems they create, you should Get The Frunk Out.I state the opposite...Short-Simple-Sweet.It is a short read: not dull at all.Simple: philosophical.Sweet: It's not about vampires or people who claim that their lives are bad when in reality they are lucky morons who could...blah blah blah.You get the point, Horus. Side: lol, in the industry, g/2@/\/\/\/\3/2 is worth nothing.Ross are redViolets are blueI can write poemsBetter than you Short and Simple, but it is not a toothsome delicacy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 i iz smart. i make poems about philosophies on a children's card game forum. Thats the best HORUS impression i've heard all day. I'm sure that makes you feel just as good as going to locals and defeating 8-year olds at Yugioh' date=' doesn't it?[/quote'] You guys are epic.Nice work Altair; that's probably the best HORUS impression I've heard all week, except perhaps, "LOL I PWN 10 YEAR OLDS AT RELIGION AND THIS MAEKS ME AWESOME AMIRITE?". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Argue with the troll and the troll wins. Keep that in mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Both the title of this thread and the poem itself are wrong.Nice job looking extremely conceited! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 i iz smart. i make poems about philosophies on a children's card game forum. Thats the best HORUS impression i've heard all day. I'm sure that makes you feel just as good as going to locals and defeating 8-year olds at Yugioh' date=' doesn't it?[/quote'] No, even better. More like 6 year olds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 i iz smart. i make poems about philosophies on a children's card game forum. Thats the best HORUS impression i've heard all day. I'm sure that makes you feel just as good as going to locals and defeating 8-year olds at Yugioh' date=' doesn't it?[/quote'] No, even better. More like 6 year olds. Even better when they start to cry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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