Lost Soul Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 HIya people! This is not a set but will be the stars of my next set. Plz rate and also plz fix ocg errors.[spoiler= Taka Leader: Sasuke Uchiha][spoiler= Lore:] If this card attacks, you lose 500 Life Points. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 if "Akatsuki Member: Itachi Uchiha" is face-up on the field. [spoiler= Taka][spoiler= Lore:] Special Summon 1 card with "Taka" in its name from your hand. [spoiler= Taka Member: Suigetsu Hozuki (I have a color pic i just dont wanna use it)][spoiler= Lore:] This card cannot be destroyed by battle (Damage calculation is applied normally). This card gains 500 ATK and DEF is "Akatsuki Member: Kisame Hoshigaki" is face-up on the field. [spoiler= Taka Member: Karin][spoiler= Lore:] This card gains 500 ATK and DEF while "Taka Leader: Sasuke Uchiha", "Curse Mark Sasuke", or "2nd State Sasuke" is face-up on your side of the field. You can tribute this card to increase the ATK and DEF of 1 card with "Taka" in its name by 500, or increase your Life Points by 1000. [spoiler= Taka Member: Jugo (ty for the image 740kt!][spoiler= Lore:] When this card is Summon, flip a coin. If heads this card's original ATK is 2500 and originalDEF is 0, if tails this card's original ATK is 0 and original DEF is 2500. This card must attack unless "Taka Leader: Sasuke Uchiha", "Curse Mark Sasuke", "2nd State Sasuke", "Sound 5 Leader: Kimimaro Kaguya", or "2nd State Kimimaro" is face-up on your side of the field. If you can send me a color pic of Jugo i will give you +1 rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
740kt Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 I think "Taka" should say Special Summon 1 "Taka" monster from your hand. Are you also going to add Karin? It seems balanced and the effects fit the card.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 yay my little brother got on so i am adding karin anf making jugoupdated. All Taka members on now on their =]. As for the ocg i know it should say that, but that is new ocg and most people dont notice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
740kt Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 In Karin, you could add an effect that deals with her chakra sensing, like maybe looking at face-down cards or something. "tribute" should be capitalized. In Jugo, it should be:When this card is Summoned, flip a coin. If heads, this card's original ATK is 2500 and original DEF is 0. If tails, this card's original ATK is 0 and original DEF is 2500. This card must attack unless "Taka Leader: Sasuke Uchiha", "Curse Mark Sasuke", "2nd State Sasuke", "Sound 5 Leader: Kimimaro Kaguya", or "2nd State Kimimaro" is face-up on your side of the field. There were just some minor punctuation errors. I think you can simplify the 3rd sentence to "This card must attack unless a "Sasuke" monster or "Kimimaro" monster is face-up in your control." or something like that. Again, both effects fit the card.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kiba~ Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 sweet full proof 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 =] ty for the feedback i am updating the jugo picupdated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chidorilevel3 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 aswome 10/10 i see no ocg errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 In Karin' date=' you could add an effect that deals with her chakra sensing, like maybe looking at face-down cards or something. "tribute" should be capitalized. In Jugo, it should be:When this card is Summoned, flip a coin. If heads, this card's original ATK is 2500 and original DEF is 0. If tails, this card's original ATK is 0 and original DEF is 2500. This card must attack unless "Taka Leader: Sasuke Uchiha", "Curse Mark Sasuke", "2nd State Sasuke", "Sound 5 Leader: Kimimaro Kaguya", or "2nd State Kimimaro" is face-up on your side of the field. There were just some minor punctuation errors. I think you can simplify the 3rd sentence to "This card must attack unless a "Sasuke" monster or "Kimimaro" monster is face-up in your control." or something like that. Again, both effects fit the card.9/10[/quote']I might add something that has to to with Karin's chakra senceFor the Jugo effect, that is wjat the sentence should read, but that is new ocg, i could've put "This card must attack unless you control a monster with "Sasuke" or "Kimimaro" in its name." But i will make a normal Sasuke Uchiha card and i dont want that to apply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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