Arekku_Koro Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Wait, didn't I just say that posting poems inveitably made you retarded on YCM? Well ya, but me being an jabroni, I wrote a poem about YCM poems. I created a poem without rthymn. At times it's almost established, but than lost. It's called her master's voice. Here it goes: Would you kindly, it's ecstasy to me.Every body else, their insulting me.My ideals are yours because you simply asked.Nobody else had ever bothered. I don't care about a rhythm, a reason or rhyme.Just as long as you don't mute yourself.I'll walk to edge of the earth, and I'll jump off it.Because you told me it was flat. You assumed I had innocence, no one else did.You assumed I've never killed.You assumed I was lost.No one else bothered. I can be innocent for you.I can kill for you.I can lose myself to you.Because no one else asked. Because your my master's voice.[/poem]trollface.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Wrong you're in the last line. You're right. It is almost established at points. But then it disappears again. Kind of like Yeti sightings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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