Lost Skill Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 My first magic card. Correct me if ya can ty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Death Exchange's effect is too powerful, even if it's half your LP (the permanent effect on your opponent is just too much), along with the OCG errors 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Skill Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 can ya tell me the OCG errors and how i can make the effect like to ur liking? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The7thSorrow Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 OCG is bad, but your new, so its understandableShould be: Pay half your Life Points, then remove all cards in your opponents Graveyard from play. Cards that are sent to your opponents Graveyard are removed from play instead. but like ragnarok1945 said, the effect is too powerful. You could destroy cards you control in addition to paying life points, or you could have the card remove both players Graveyard. both these effects would probably balance it out, but its really up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThaJuceman Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 OO Death Exchanges is overpowered LOLidk why its a CNT. Spell. But juz change the effect totally cuz dats wayy to over-powered. But Void Knight is pretty tight tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Skill Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 OCG is bad' date=' but your new, so its understandableShould be: Pay half your Life Points, then remove all cards in your opponents Graveyard from play. Cards that are sent to your opponents Graveyard are removed from play instead. but like ragnarok1945 said, the effect is too powerful. You could destroy cards you control in addition to paying life points, or you could have the card remove both players Graveyard. both these effects would probably balance it out, but its really up to you.[/quote'] i edited it thx for the tips.OO Death Exchanges is overpowered LOLidk why its a CNT. Spell. But juz change the effect totally cuz dats wayy to over-powered. But Void Knight is pretty tight tho. haha ik its overpowerred just edited. and thx so many ppl helped wiht my editing the Void Knight card. It had no background before and it was way too overpowerred. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The7thSorrow Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 no problem, if you need any more OCG help try this linkhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antist0opid Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 I honestly think it alright. Kinda like Macros Cosmos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Skill Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 yay finally someone with a cheerfull comment :)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 The first card is a bit OP'ed. Good cards.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Skill Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 yay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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