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Alexis Rhodes

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It's very good card but change the pic...... And the effect have one wrong thing it should be "add one Dragon type monster to your from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand"...........

I think its great to make your own deck but don't post all of it if you want to to stay for along time with out letting the others to make a cards that can crush your deck fast.......... I have a dragon field card if you want just tell me and I'll post for you ok...........

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The image could use a background

"Ancient" is misspelled

The effect has OCG errors. Here's a fixed effect:

"If this card is successfully Normal Summoned, add 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand."

 

Other than that, the stats are fair, and it's not an overall terrible card. 5/10 so far!

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thanks very much:lol:


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my newest card what do you all think ?

 

i have seen people that have made there own booster packs and have made there own front cover , i have done 3 of these but have deleted them :( so i am going to make a dragon booster pack and front cover :) ( i am going to make the front cover on paint shop pro )

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Right' date=' forgot to rate.

 

I give you 7/10 for effort and having a useful effect^_^

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thanks again

 

this is going better than i thought :D

 

i have been looking at some finished sets that people have made and there seem to be a lot of dragons so i will make some diffrent cards is there any types that everyone would like to see ? ( i was thinking about lego eg. lego superman etc etc )

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for the second card you have some OCG errors, here is the correct OCG(I think :? ):

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for each card with "Dragon" on it's card name in your Graveyard.

get better pics for the cards 'cause the second one is overused

and the effects are too plain

 

good for a new member

7.9/10

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Having a white background on images makes it bland and dull for the character to be in. You can always 'shop the character into a background' date=' or find an image which HAS one. But yes, having a white background will cost you.

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ok thanks and does anyone think that luigi and mario cards things like that are good card idea`s

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