lookatthatawesomecard15 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 [/img][/img]Please tell me what you think of this synchro monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Ativates = activates ;). Perhaps you should say:"Each time your opponent activates a Spell Card, this card gains 200 ATK points". Nice Synchro monster, for sure :).The lore from Lost Imp should be altered a little bit:"When this card is destroyed or removed from the field, you can put it in your Deck. The Deck is then shuffled". 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lookatthatawesomecard15 Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Thank you for the advice. I will fix it soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MujinTengu Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 nice image...OCG errors and effect need to be changed or added another effect to both of the cards.OCG fix Imp.S:ativates=activate spell card=Spell Carddeck=Deck"Lost Imp"=1 "Lost Imp"(add "Tuner if you want to it really dosen't metter)OCG fix L.Imp:"When this card is destroyed, add it to your Deck, the Deck then shuffle." overall 5.9/10 (7)....(7) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 "The Deck then shuffle" is not really correct English ;)."The Deck is then shuffeld' sounds better :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MujinTengu Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 maybe...but you know its a Quick Reply so.*shuffled Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Ah well...making mistakes is totally human :).Perhaps you should read what you have written, before you post it ;). Ok chaps, back ontopic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Nice synchro. the effect is a bit plain. The Lost Imp's effect is good since it's a Tuner. The OCG needs a little work. The pics are good, although the first is overused. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 1st pic is overused, 2nd card's effect a little too plain, but since it's a tuner it balances it out more 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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