1KewlDude Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 This is the first card I've ever made and I want some feedback on whether it is good or not. I hope to make a set as well, using this card, but I don't want to do that if it was bad from the beginning. It was originally going to be a normal monster but then I came up with the idea of having a synchro monster which requires this card... So what do you think? EDIT: I've updated the card again correcting the Draw mistake I made.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 The pic is ok but don't mix descriptions with effect monsters. It's either a Normal or Effect monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThaJuceman Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 I Like the card.Juz dnt mix description with effect monsters tho.other than that, i like it. So i give it 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 A Tuner monster has an effect, but the lore of this card is a description of the monster itself. Such a lore is only used with Normal Monsters. You must give this card an effect, for instance:"As long as this card remains in face-up Defence Position, you gain 1000 Life Points per turn" (same as Dancing Fairy).The PIC is brilliant, and the monster has a reasonable ATK and DEF value. Maybe you should increase the DEF a little more (1800 or so;)). If you want to create a card with a lore like this, it has to be a Normal Monster ;). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1KewlDude Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 So in other words... a tuner is an effect monster? Thanks for the comments =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 @Kewldude;For as far as I know, they are :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 There can be normal tuner monsters, however they carry the vanilla color the same as other normal monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 @Ultimate-Card-Creator:.I just checked the Yugioh Wiki, and there are indeed Normal Tuner monsters. So this card is Ok, but it needs a Vanilla color in order to be perfect. The lore is good, but the color isn't ;P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1KewlDude Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 I've given it an effect and increased it's defense which I think makes it worthy of 4 stars... maybe 5 because the effect is actually quite good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 I don't know if that is possible in the Card Maker. If you choose 'Monster' and make it a Tuner, it will automatically gain the Effect Monster colour...You can try, but I think it won't be succesfull ;). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Effect seems a little bland, it needs another one. The pic is very good and OCG is perfect.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 I don't know if that is possible in the Card Maker. If you choose 'Monster' and make it a Tuner' date=' it will automatically gain the Effect Monster colour...You can try, but I think it won't be succesfull ;).[/quote'] In order to do this in the card maker, you must select normal monster.You would have to type "/ Tuner" after you type the monster type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 pick up = Draw.....7.5/10,@vailan -- no, there aren't normal tuner monsters... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1KewlDude Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Effect seems a little bland' date=' it needs another one. The pic is very good and OCG is perfect.9/10[/quote']Are you talking about this effect: During your Draw Phase, if you pick up a Level 4 or lower Fairy-type Monster, you can Special Summon it. ??? I think it's quite good... could you elaborate... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 pick up = Draw.....7.5/10' date='@vailan -- no, there aren't normal tuner monsters...[/quote'] There are indeed normal tuner monsters. Eg. Tune Warrior and Genex Controller. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1KewlDude Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 pick up = Draw.....7.5/10' date='@vailan -- no, there aren't normal tuner monsters...[/quote']There are normal tuners... Tune Warrior.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 I'd say like around 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 effect is good, though a bit too bland, maybe another effect should be added, pic is beautiful though 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Yeah. Boring but by no means unusable. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iamayugiohfreak22 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 It's a great card, and I think there is nothing wrong 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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