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Well, seems like Gold made an oopsy here.

Haiku: a Japanese form of poetry which consists of 3 lines, alternating syllables 5,7,5.

 

 

meh i say it's about love..

 

love is boring..

 

next...

 

Actually, it was a vague collection of words I threw together to look deep. Because that's how it works, right?

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meh i say it's about love..

 

love is boring..

 

next...

 

Actually' date=' it was a vague collection of words I threw together to look deep. Because that's how it works, right?

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meh i guess... I'm depressed/sad right now.... it looks deep... so meh... i guess it works...

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Man' date=' this one is horrible.

Sure it's short and simple, but it ain't sweet, not even deep.

I was not amused.

You bore me/10

END TOPIC.

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You're just too shallow and unsophisticated to see the true genius behind it.

 

 

i sense ownage... and yeah Dweller it's a deep poem, Haiku.. Haiku's are just hard as heck to understand sometimes... -.-

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Man' date=' this one is horrible.

Sure it's short and simple, but it ain't sweet, not even deep.

I was not amused.

You bore me/10

END TOPIC.

[/quote']

 

You're just too shallow and unsophisticated to see the true genius behind it.

 

I like my dog...

My dog is black...

I like my cat...

My cat is white...

 

BLACK AND WHITE...OH YEA

I see two colors...yea!!

 

I said if

Youre thinkin of

Being my baby

It dont matter if youre black or white

 

I said if

Youre thinkin of

Being my brother

It dont matter if youre

Black or white

 

ooh.....yea

 

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craptastic

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Man' date=' this one is horrible.

Sure it's short and simple, but it ain't sweet, not even deep.

I was not amused.

You bore me/10

END TOPIC.

[/quote']

 

You're just too shallow and unsophisticated to see the true genius behind it.

 

 

i sense ownage... and yeah Dweller it's a deep poem, Haiku.. Haiku's are just hard as heck to understand sometimes... -.-

 

It don't matter if your black or white. :P

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Man' date=' this one is horrible.

Sure it's short and simple, but it ain't sweet, not even deep.

I was not amused.

You bore me/10

END TOPIC.

[/quote']

 

You're just too shallow and unsophisticated to see the true genius behind it.

 

 

i sense ownage... and yeah Dweller it's a deep poem, Haiku.. Haiku's are just hard as heck to understand sometimes... -.-

 

It don't matter if your black or white. :P

 

lolfail

 

(but i do agree poems are getting annoying.. pple who can poet.. are good.. those who can't =/ well MODS please stop the poems or you could just make a stick poem thread in general to keep pple busy for a while.. =D )

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A haiku by OMGAKITTY

 

Brilliant blooming' date='

My soul reacheth for thine own,

Thine heart doth not know.

 

I'm so f***ing deep.

[/quote']

 

I'm going to try to decipher this masterpiece, line by line.

 

Brilliant blooming -

Obviously you are conveying your sense of self worth by writing this poem, as well as showcasing how stupid most of the poetry thread in general are and seem to you. Because of this, you pronounced "Brilliant" so badly that you decided to put it in the first line and screw up the poem. But you don't care, because you didn't like most of the poems in the first place, so "WTF, why the hell not."

 

My soul reacheth for thine own, -

Even though you actually got the necessary number of syllables in this line, you did so by creating your own word to complete it, once again showing you don't give a crap.

 

Thine heart doth not know. -

Actually, I'm pretty sure why you wrote this and made this pointless thread. Nevertheless, it has enough syllables, so it's "decent".

 

I'm so f***ing deep. -

Yes, yes you are.

 

Thank you.

 

This has been poetry reading with Luxord.

 

Join me every week on Tuesdays for another exciting poetry evaluation.

 

tl;dr - You just don't give a ____, and I applaud you for doing so.

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Man' date=' this one is horrible.

Sure it's short and simple, but it ain't sweet, not even deep.

I was not amused.

You bore me/10

END TOPIC.

[/quote']

 

You're just too shallow and unsophisticated to see the true genius behind it.

 

 

i sense ownage... and yeah Dweller it's a deep poem, Haiku.. Haiku's are just hard as heck to understand sometimes... -.-

 

It don't matter if your black or white. :P

 

lolfail

 

(but i do agree poems are getting annoying.. pple who can poet.. are good.. those who can't =/ well MODS please stop the poems or you could just make a stick poem thread in general to keep pple busy for a while.. =D )

 

no fail'

If Father Wolf or Crab Helmet would post that you would all go shed tears or fall off a mountain to bend down to their knee's to tell them how much you love them and such forth. You little britches...tight.

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Passing

A haiku by OMGAKITTY

 

Brilliant blooming' date='

My soul reacheth for thine own,

Thine heart doth not know.

 

I'm so f***ing deep.

[/quote']

 

I'm going to try to decipher this masterpiece, line by line.

 

Brilliant blooming -

Obviously you are conveying your sense of self worth by writing this poem, as well as showcasing how stupid most of the poetry thread in general are and seem to you. Because of this, you pronounced "Brilliant" so badly that you decided to put it in the first line and screw up the poem. But you don't care, because you didn't like most of the poems in the first place, so "WTF, why the hell not."

 

My soul reacheth for thine own, -

Even though you actually got the necessary number of syllables in this line, you did so by creating your own word to complete it, once again showing you don't give a crap.

 

Thine heart doth not know. -

Actually, I'm pretty sure why you wrote this and made this pointless thread. Nevertheless, it has enough syllables, so it's "decent".

 

I'm so f***ing deep. -

Yes, yes you are.

 

Thank you.

 

This has been poetry reading with Luxord.

 

Join me every week on Tuesdays for another exciting poetry evaluation.

 

tl;dr - You just don't give a ____, and I applaud you for doing so.

 

Oh. You're good. You're very good.

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Man' date=' this one is horrible.

Sure it's short and simple, but it ain't sweet, not even deep.

I was not amused.

You bore me/10

END TOPIC.

[/quote']

 

You're just too shallow and unsophisticated to see the true genius behind it.

 

 

i sense ownage... and yeah Dweller it's a deep poem, Haiku.. Haiku's are just hard as heck to understand sometimes... -.-

 

It don't matter if your black or white. :P

 

lolfail

 

(but i do agree poems are getting annoying.. pple who can poet.. are good.. those who can't =/ well MODS please stop the poems or you could just make a stick poem thread in general to keep pple busy for a while.. =D )

 

no fail'

If Father Wolf or Crab Helmet would post that you would all go shed tears or fall off a mountain to bend down to their knee's to tell them how much you love them and such forth. You little britches...tight.

 

ha yeah right i'd still say lolfail

I'm only 1 mans Britch and he is Mako tha Shark-man thank you very much >=/

and i despise all males but my Mako.....

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