Unleash Your Wrath

[MasterOfMagicians]

The Master Of Magicians is opening himself up for criticism.

 

You have seen me post a few times in the past making comments on your cards. Primarily, the Magician cards many of you have made.

 

Now it is your turn. I have in my signature, my very own Magician card. That is where you shall start. Rate that card. In the future I will post more cards (I am currently working on an entire deck based off of Zelda: Ocarina of Time).

 

Let the flogging BEGIN!

[VainZiler]

It needs some card grammar tweaking, as well as a lot of words need to be capitalized. The card should read:

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Dark Magician", 1 "Sorcerer of Dark Magic", and 1 "Dark Paladin" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can activate Spell or Trap Cards. When this card destroys a monster, the destroyed monsters effect is negated."

 

All around, its overpowered. Once you get this card in your hand, you just just summon it, regardless of the required materials state. Plus, it just makes it impossible to stop, unless you got a flip effect monster, or a monster with an effect to stop t from attacking.

[Art]

That's a really powerful effect you have going. It almost makes you invincible while he's out on the field. Not to say that it's overpowered, but the reward doesn't quite equal the risk. One suggestion would be to make it so the cards you must remove from play have to be in your graveyard only. Even better, the cards have to be out on the field.

 

Still, the pic, grammar, and overall look are all good. 8/10.

 

Art...

[MasterOfMagicians]

If it is overpowered, it is simply that because of the cost, and the length the duel would have to reach to get it onto the field. Essentially its an eyesore in anyone's deck.

Dark Paladin requires fusion before it can even reach the field or graveyard. The only way to fusion summon it is a fusion between Buster Blader and Dark Magician.

Sorcerer of Dark Magic requires a sacrifice of two level 6 or higher spellcasters from your side of the field.

 

I agree with art. Perhaps I will change it to "They must be on the field", however that seems to make it easier to bring out.

 

Essentially, by the time you have all three required monsters that you need to sacrifice to bring him out, the duel should be over (if not close to it). If your opponent even brings him out, that means he's been able to destroy you for at least 10 turns and has just messed with you.

 

Overpowered, maybe so. But its balanced out with the cost.

[VainZiler]

Your arguement would have some merit to it, if it wasn;t for the fact that you added in your cards effect that you can simply remove the cards from the deck as well. not just your field or graveyard.

 

Just by going by that, once you get the card itself, bam, you got it on the field.

[MasterOfMagicians]

Good catch. That one I will fix.

It will be changed to, "field or graveyard"

 

 

 

 

 

 

changed!

[MasterOfMagicians]

sorry, gotta bump

[Wild C]

The cards is still overpowered. After all there are cards that allow you to move cards from your deck to your hand, and cards allowing you to move cards from your deck to the graveyard. I cannot think of the name, but Gozoboru used this card during his battle against Kaiba in the virtual world. You take 5 cards from your deck and show them to your opponent. the opponent chooses one card and places that card in your hand, the rest go to your graveyard. All you would need to do is pick Dark Magician, and the other required monsters, and two weak monsters such as watapon. Then if you already have it in your hand, you will be able to summon it as early as turn one.

 

Sorry but that is my veiw on the situation.

 

4000 attack points makes it a rival to the EG of egypt, and the legendary beasts.

[Bloodrun]

Yewha man this is way opver powered, try tweaking the effect a bit, so have it do somethign like, this card cannot attack the tun it is summoned, and, you must offer a monster from your side of the field, to keep this card in play, each turn, or something like that :o

[RestLess-BoTics]

I agree with bloodrun.

[Yankee]

Too strong. Never gonna bring it out anyway. Why would smobody toy with another that way. That is not good mannars. If you can win, and you make your opponent suffer for the time it takes to bring him out, that is just mean. I am not sayjng that I am never mean, but that is too much. Yuo bring out dark magician, strong guy, you bring out dark magic, super stong, and then chaos, that is just toying around. I do not like that card at all. 0/10

[Saiba Aisu]

Too strong. Never gonna bring it out anyway. Why would smobody toy with another that way. That is not good mannars. If you can win' date=' and you make your opponent suffer for the time it takes to bring him out, that is just mean. I am not sayjng that I am never mean, but that is too much. Yuo bring out dark magician, strong guy, you bring out dark magic, super stong, and then chaos, that is just toying around. I do not like that card at all. 0/10

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Good point. It's important to win and play your best, but not at the cost of pure cruelty. I'd rather win by 300 damage than 2000. It's the same thing. ^^ Don't get me wrong, the art is nice, the name is cliche, the effect is overpowered, but I like it. That's all. 2/10.

[MasterOfMagicians]

well, I appologise if sometimes my dueling technique seems a little cruel. Usually when I'm playing against others I keep it short and to the point. Something like this card is what I use against friends, whom I've dueled 400,000,000 times over. I know their decks as well as they do.

 

Personal inside thing between my friends and I.

You may see them on this site one day.

They go by the aliases of Overlord of Dragons

and Wasteland Warrior.

[MasterOfMagicians]

alright, I added two more cards to the criticizing.

and yes, these are all used to rub salt in the wounds of defeat.

mwahahahahaha!

[Saiba Aisu]

You have a few grammar issues with Overlord and Wasteland...It's discard, not destroy.

[Tekken Ham]

Letsee... First one: 5/10 its great but getting them all out would be annoying and cruel, and you could use Foolish Burial and Cheerful Coffin and Cyber-stein to get the cards out.

Second one: 3/10. Why? Well, Victory Dragon is banned and a promo so not many people have it AND you cant use it in the Advanced format also it is waaaaaaaay overpowered.

3rd one: 0/10 :P There is no card called "Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the End" and the effect is confusing. lol its like u made these cards bad on purpose

[MasterOfMagicians]

okay changes have been made.

[DarkMagician1990]

"Um the card Wild C's talking about is painful choice." The card is a bit overpowered and summoning it's like near impossible even when playing a spellcaster deck. Good effect but yeah the grammer needs work. But then again you can get away with making any type of card as long as there's a weakness everyone can exployt(sorry not the best speller).

[Dark Supreme]

6.555 / 10