Hopefully realistic :)

[omegahunter9]

My friends and I had the idea of creating an entire deck of realistically balanced cards and dueling with them.

 

And so I submit the following:

Let me know if you think it's OP or reasonable, possible changes to balance the cards out are appreciated too.

[Vailan]

The lore has to be altered:

This monster can be Special Summoned grom the Graveyard by paying 1000 Life Points.

Attack = ATK.

 

Piece of Equity...Rock-Type? I think that Thunder would do much better ;). Well, if it is a comet or so, than Rock is the best option :P.

 

"By tributing ... ... .. from YOUR side of the field" ;)

 

As long as the tributes remain in the Graveyard...that's a nasty effect for the opponent!.

Mary the Fallen One has also a 'Graveyard effect'. As long as she remains there, the owner receives 200 LP per turn.

And this effect is more powerful, maybe a little too powerful, but it seems balanced :)

 

8.5/10

 

The monster cards seem balanced, and their effects are realistic.

[regalsword65]

These are more OP'ed then balanced in my opinion. The 2nd one has Relinquished's effect....I'd use them though because they are OP'ed mwahahaha.

 

7.5/10

[omegahunter9]

- Corrected the lore

- Made 'Equity' a Wind monster Thunder type

- Made a slight balance change to The Triumvirate

[regalsword65]

Still OP'ed :(

 

I guess I'll bump the rate up to 7.7/10 (unusual amount)

[Vailan]

The lore has been corrected! It is much better now :D

[ragnarok1945]

piece of equity's effect is a lot like Relinquished's effect

 

the effects are slightly OPed, but reasonable for early cards

 

7.5/10

[omegahunter9]

-Changed 'Piece of Equity' to a 5 star monster (compared as an advanced form of Chthonian Soldier)

-Kept 'Judgment' (compared as an advanced form of Cat's Ear Tribe) and 'Prosperity' (Compared as an advanced form of Cure Mermaid) the same after further analyzing the balance of the monster cards.

Since The Triumvirate has a longer effect now, and is harder to read I'll type it out here.

"This card cannot be activated the turn it is played. This cards effect can only be activated by giving up half your Life Points and tributing "Piece of Judgment" "Piece of Equity" and "Piece of Prosperity" face up from your side of the field. While all the tributes to activate this card remain in your graveyard, this card cannot be removed from the field. Whenever you deal damage to your opponents Life Points, increase your Life Points by the same amount."

- Added the condition "giving up half your Life Points" to the Triumvirate

- Added the condition "tributing _ _ and _ face up on your side of the field"

- Added the condition "While all the tributes"

My ultimate goal here is to get a stamp of balanced approval ^_^ so I can use them :D Let me know, and especially tell me why you think something is OP, maybe something I can change to waver your opinion on that.

 

Thank you all for your input :)

[omegahunter9]

Bump ^_^ I can't use it if somebody doesn't give me at least 'somewhat balanced' stamps :P