Harkulka Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 This is one of my first cards in a group called "warp" monsters. Can i get some feedback on what you people think of it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Pic is nice, the lore has to be altered a little bit: "Your opponent cannot take control of this card. If this card destroys an opponent's monster in battle, you gain 500 Life Points. If this card attacks your opponent's Life Points directly, you must destroy this card". :). 8,2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harkulka Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 thanks, ill fix it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 I keep telling you, warp is not a real type, might want to rid of that on the text 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 It's his idea ;), he is the creator of this card.No card here is real. If one goes mad, one can create anything :D that is what makes YCM so wonderful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 as ragnorok said its not a real type7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 maybe make it a sub-type and leave it that way. Small OCG errers.A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Fake types are against the rules sorry to say. The pic is pretty good. The OCG needs a little work. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UltimaAku Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 they are right, this is in realistic cards, fake types cant be added so im not gonna rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 it cannot be with two types and warp is not a real typeyou may update it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 I don't like fake type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 why is its type called Warp? You capitilize every letter in start of a word in the name except 'of' or 'the' and such. 6/10. and a new type just doesn't work until psychics get old. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradthecanivingfootlicker Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 OCG, OCG, OCG.5/10 but since you're new 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Name needs Capital letters.Fake type.OCG errors. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0b3rt Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 "Control of this card cannot change. Whenever this card destroys a monster by battle, increase your Life Points by 500. If this card attacks your opponent's Life Points directly, destroy this card at the end of the damage step." Warp is not a type, just leave it as an archetype and be done with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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