Blazer Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 This Is MY fIRSt card so plz rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 It's to OP lower it's ATK and maybe Give it a Special Summoning restriction or a activation restriction. You could also change it's effect to only let it's boost last until your next end phase?Anyways a 8/10. Nice pic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Thanks for rating it good cause this is the best rating i ever gotton since i joined Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 really?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Not a bad card at all. Awesome pic. But here's a little OCG: You can discard 1 card to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card. If this card destroys a Dinosaur-Type or Beast-Type monster by battle, this card gains 500 ATK. This card cannot be destroyed by Spell or Trap Cards. If this card is destroyed by battle, double the Battle Damage you would have taken. Great for a good card, keep up the good work. 9.2/10BTW: Remember to cap the title, and OCG meansO=OfficialC=CardG=Grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 the pic is overused, but the effect is very well balanced, so it gets 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frdggs Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 This MY first Card. Hope you enjoy. Please rate.  good pic 9\10 some grammar mistakes 6\10 not so good of an effect 4\10 overall 6.33\10 good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 tahnks for rating guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 The effect is pretty good. The pic is overused but matches. It seems balanced. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradthecanivingfootlicker Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 OCG errors.Don't put "(So that proves that this card sucks)" at the end.Capitalize name.Good pic.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Name: Willbeast the Water Murderer Capitalize. Use Godslayer's fix for OCG. I like the use of alliteration for the name, but it really doesn't match up with the effect at all. You call it the Water Murderer, but your effect has nothing to do with limiting or destroying WATER, Sea Serpent, or Aqua monsters at all. I like how you tried to incorporate the idea of it 'absorbing' the Beast/Dinosaur types, as that seems to be what the picture is about. I would take it a step further and actually have the destroyed cards either removed from play or placed under this card. For the amount of stars it has, the ATK is actually pretty low. However, it balances itself with S/T immunity. I like the card and effect, but I would rename it something that fits better with the pic and effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 6/10 over powered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 lol i try changing the part that it says so that proves that this card sucks but not working Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 ok! nice effect exepiting the part you say "so that proves that this card sucks"but I think it´s balanced9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 there i changed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fatmancory Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 needs work in word cards seems a little over powered to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 your first card yes?in your card memory says that you have 38 cards registered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted September 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 i mean like the first card i made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted September 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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