super duper ultra spider Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Bad OCG with bad pics and bland effect. But it's still a good try for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Floridakid36 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Not bad for a new member 6.5/10Your in the right directionLearn your OCG and find better picsYou'll learn how to edit real good later on OCG Fixes:Most of the cards just need Capitalization and Punctuation Kamehameha - Should be an Equip Spell card. Not "for 1 turn" - "Until the End Phase" Cell Cards:1st Form - During the End Phase of a Turn this card destroys a monster by battle, you can tribute this card to Special Summon "Cell - 2nd Form".2nd Form - During the End Phase of a turn this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent's Life Points, you can tribute this card to Special Summon "Cell - Perfect Form".(I think you should get rid of the 2nd Perfect Cell) Good Luck nonetheless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 This should be Cell's attack: Anyway, 7/10Coo' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snyperfox2003 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Not bad for a new member 6.5/10Your in the right directionLearn your OCG and find better picsYou'll learn how to edit real good later on OCG Fixes:Most of the cards just need Capitalization and Punctuation Kamehameha - Should be an Equip Spell card. Not "for 1 turn" - "Until the End Phase" Cell Cards:1st Form - During the End Phase of a Turn this card destroys a monster by battle' date=' you can tribute this card to Special Summon "Cell - 2nd Form".2nd Form - During the End Phase of a turn this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent's Life Points, you can tribute this card to Special Summon "Cell - Perfect Form".(I think you should get rid of the 2nd Perfect Cell) Good Luck nonetheless.[/quote'] ^^this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 some of the pics need backgroundsand what florida said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
super duper ultra spider Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Thnks for the comments I'll Always ttry harder=)I'll update soonUmmmmmm............How do i update?I FIGURED IT OUT WOO HOO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
super duper ultra spider Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 WAT DO U THINK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 4/10 Pics are overused, OCG is bad, Effects are boring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tails12345 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 It Needs Better Descriptions But I Did The Same Thing When I Was New My Descriptions were actually worst for a new member 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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