gallio1 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Please tell me if i should continue this deck or start something else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 OCG needs to be altered a little bit:Demon of Souls."When this card is succesfully summoned, the effects of all Spell and Trap Cards on the field are negated untill this card is destroyed or removed from the field"(This means that YOUR cards are also useless while this one is on the field). Flaming Fiend. (Blazing Fiend sounds more wicked ;)).Normal Summoned."This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 cards in your hand from play. When this card is Special Summoned succesfully, you can select and remove one card from your opponent's hand" Nice :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Artwork - niceOCG - almost flawless (summoned - Summoned)Effects - Awesome 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Thanks for the comments, I'll try to make better cards later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Now the 3 last cards (Bringer,Grasp,Reborn) Artwork - Pretty awesomeOCG - ERRORS - (ATK/DEF - Attack/Defense points,user-controller,Graveyard,there are no Trap Equip Cards - only Spell Equip cards,subtract - reduce/in your case "halve",Graveyard - grave)Effects - some are unclear,some are underpowered,some are both Bringer - Usable with "Zombie World" but shouldn't be that high,reduce his Level to 5 or lower and also remove the removing from play part,at least the two other cards. 7/10 Grasp - Effect is can be UP and can be OP,depending on the card selected.If you select "Millenium Shield" awesome,"Gene Warped Werewolf" - not so awesome.If it were me,it would be similar to "Riryoku" - "Halve the equipped's monster ATK and increase its DEF by half of his ATK" or something like that.Still,great card - 9/10 Reborn - if you meant to make it a Continous it's OP'ed.If you meant it to be QuickPlay it's not.Effect is unclear.If it's QP it should be "Each time you Special Summon a monster this turn, Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard" - if you mean that - it's pretty great card.But you should add a drawback - something like "The Summoned monster can't declare an attack the turn it is Summoned" or "The Summoned monster is destroy during End Phase of this turn".Anyway - cool card 8/10. Overall - 7.5/10 (would be 8.5 but it's -1 for grammar) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 two spell card effects a bit too bland, the monster effects are good though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 how can i make the cards less bland? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Be original with the effects or at least make them more complex(Add more than 1 effect and mabey a drawback effect) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Thanks Ill do it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 I think it's good for a new menber!8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 two spell card effects a bit too bland' date=' the monster effects are good though 8/10[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 They're pretty well made despite the OCG errors. The effects are all pretty well balanced and the pictures look great. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Thanks, which one has bad OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 good effect and grammer :) overall not bad 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heronick Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Graps is underpowered u should remove the 600 lifepoints thingy. reducing halve of the att is enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal666 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 I like all the cards, pictures very awesome! You MUST continue this Deck, it's too strong! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted September 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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