New Single - Swift Assassin (edited effect)

[Kronikman]

 

Effect: If you draw this card when your opponent controls more monsters than you, you can Special Summon it in Attack Position. If this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, destroy 1 Monster Card. If the destroyed Monster is Level 5 or higher, inflict damage equal to half of the destroyed monster's ATK. If this card attacks your opponent directly, send 1 card from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by the effect of a Trap Card.

[OMGAKITTY]

This effect is ridiculously conditional, and mostly worthless. The chances of you drawing this on your first turn is slim enough, but then in order to actually do (not very much) damage, you opponent (who gets to choose) has to discard a lvl 5 or up?

:/

 

The best part about this is that is can't be destroyed by traps.

 

I would have given it something that ran more along the lines of...you know, killing stuff. The trap immunity was a good addition, since it makes sense with the card theme. The rest of it, not so much.

[Kronikman]

thank you very much for pointing that out. i edited the effect a bit

[OMGAKITTY]

Much better. You don't need to say 'face-up Attack Position' though, just 'Attack Position' works fine (since there's no way to have a face down attack position)

[Kronikman]

thanks i changed that. bump

[nick2496~]

Ok 1st you cannot bump until 24 or 12 hours and with the I changed that,, it would bring your post up. no need to say bump

2nd In my opinion the effect is a little bit OP'd

8/10 - the bump 6/10

jk 8/10..........

[ragnarok1945]

with the OCG corrected, the card looks relatively balanced out, could use a bit more atk though

 

7.9/10

[Kronikman]

ok thx for the rate.

[ThaJuceman]

OCG Ok (Could Be Fixed)

Graphic Is Pretty Good.

 

I Say 7/10

[Kronikman]

thx a lot for the rate