kriskirla Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 [align=center][spoiler=lore]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 card on the field. You can Tribute this card to negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect that destroys a card(s) on the field, and destroy that card. If you negate an effect this way, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase by paying 500 life piont.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeMaster Calvin Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 wow thats great for a Newb. 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Not bad, the image is pretty good and it fits the name, and the OCG is fine. I think it is a bit overpowered though, maybe add a Life Point payment or something to Special Summon it from the Graveyard. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 ok, i will edit it. Thanks for the common. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Good card but it's too much like Stardust Dragon. I suggest you improvise on the last part of the effect.7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Thanks for the common but can't there be other card with that effect?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 beautiful picture, the effect suits it quite well 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 thanks^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 more common please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Artwork - Beautiful,but shouldn't it be a WATER?OCG - Didn't find one errorEffect - too much like a Stardust Dragon + a bit OP'ed IMO,maybe if you increase the cost to 700? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Thanks for the common. For the Water Thing, I like light that why,lol ^.^ and the 700 thing i might change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 To much like Stardust. The pic looks great. The idea is good. It's relatively balanced. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 More Feedbacks please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 you DID find this pic on Deviant Art right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Donno, I found it on google,lol ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 interesting. 90% of the time google pics are crap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Lol, Somethimes Google have good pic too. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 I know that, otherwise I'd have said 100% of the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 oh well, c ya for now. Have to log off. c ya^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 You have OCG errors in the last sentence, change life points to Life Points. Card is OP and the pic is overused but is good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 [align=center]Picture is nice =DEffect is ok, a tiny bit O'ped though. I would change the last part :SOCG is pretty good, still, a made a little fix: 1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersOnce per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 card on the field. You can Tribute this card to negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect that destroys a card(s) on the field, and destroy that card. If you do so, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated by paying 500 Life Points. Otherwise: 8/10 ^^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks for the comment, but isn't the OCG you change almost the same as mine?? 0.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks for the comment' date=' but isn't the OCG you change almost the same as mine?? o.0[/quote'] [align=center]Yeah, but I told you, OCG is good, still I made some little changes o.OThere were some little errors, and I fixed them D=It should be better now.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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